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[While the bright hours of daylight have long passed, the world doesn't yet belong to the night. It is dusk, the time of the dying sun. A killing is at hand ( Read more... )

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[Rao walks down the street on her way home, hiding the true plotting nature inside with a warm smile. Feeling a sudden chill, she stops and looks over her shoulder.....and she is there, the Rao killed by Ninetails' own malicious power, floating and incorporeal and here when she should have been nothing but dry abandoned bones ( Read more... )

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-a true savior! Okay, let's go to the treasure ship right away, then! Although... We must wait a while until the new moon rises in the night sky.

...Hm? What's go-

[pause, then a feminine gasp]Wh-what is this place?! How- how did I get here? One minute I was- and then I ( Read more... )