http://itsjoanna.livejournal.com/2075.html

Great Job!

I really liked the story! You write really well, and the part near the end was almost heartbreaking, but I'm glad that it had a happy ending.
Keep up the good work, and I hope that you can continue to write more entries and stories like this!
*five thumbs up*

- Germaine

Lucas: “There comes a time when every life goes off course. In this desperate moment you must choose your direction. Will you fight to stay on the path while others tell you who you are? Or will you label yourself? Will you be honored by your choice? Or will you embrace your new path? Each morning you choose to move forward or to simply give up.”

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http://alyssajs.livejournal.com/2687.html

Unsatisfying Ending

You have a lot of interesting thoughts there Alyssa!

I agree when you said "Maybe, the female hasn't had this type of experience before, and, when it occurs, she becomes both uncomfortable, yet is comforted by him."

I guess because of her opinion of herself, she probably thought she'd never ( Read more... )

The Man from Mars was a very interesting read. In the story, we are presented with a girl who is insecure, has low-self esteem and is searching desperately for a way to try to fit in. It was very unfortunate that her first experience with a guy who has actually taken an interest in her - someone who made her feel special for the first time in her ( Read more... )

http://silv90.livejournal.com/2117.html

WOW!

You're really energetic and enthusiastic! I haven't slept at 9.30pm in ages, so I think I'll take your recommendation and sleep at that time tonight or something! I too, also enjoy our literature lectures and unlike some of my other lectures, it doesn't seem to drag on as long.

I just wanted to give you a ( Read more... )

"Every cloud has as silver lining"  - (Proverb)
I posted this entry up as private in another one of my personal blogs until I got this right ... and since I think the poem is decent enough, I have decided to post it up. In our last literature lecture, we were asked to write a poem on one of the gallery of pictures in our readings - the one that most ( Read more... )

http://jessbrown1.livejournal.com/2214.html

Compelling!

The poem you wrote was great! It's very well written and I think it captures your heritage very well.
Keep up the good work!
*thumbs up*

Clark: “Look, I got held up at work…I finished one thing Lois, and something else would come up.”

Lois: “Look, I get it … you have other things on your mind. I don’t expect to be the person at the top of your priority list.”

(Smallville - Season 8, Episode 15: ‘Infamous’)

Society nowadays is not what it once used to be. Due to the demands of ( Read more... )

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Insightful!

WOW ... I couldn't say it any better myself! It sucks how society plays a huge role in how we see ourselves as individuals and how the 'norms' in society often forces us to question who we are and whether or not we are deemed acceptable to everyone else in society. And have you also noticed how ( Read more... )

As I begin writing the first of many entries in this newfound place where random ramblings are very much welcomed, I think an introduction is a necessity.

I go by the name Germaine ... and if I've ever introduced myself to you, you'd most likely remember me as the girl who can't say her name properly. (YEAH, I'm that girl. LOL)
18; random and new to ( Read more... )