Jackpot, Tie Breaker

[gildedage]

The first time it happened, it terrified her. She’d been standing in front of the mirror after her shower, trying to see herself in the steamed over glass. Instead, she saw him, with straw colored hair and gray green eyes, gangly as a teenager could get where her reflection should have been.

Comments

[joyfulfeather]

I liked that! Very clever idea.

[gildedage]

Thanks!

[beautyofgrey]

I really like this idea - great tiebreaker entry.

[gildedage]

Thanks!

[creature_girl08]

I was so enthrolled by the whole story. The waiting to see if they saw one another in the mirror again. Would they by chance meet in some ramdom place? Just so fabulous.

[gildedage]

Thanks! It was fun to write.

[kehlen]

I love it!

Just one thing:
babysitting for the Peterson’s
You probably meant for the PetersoNS. And it's better to avoid this particular mistake, it's a pet peeve of many people I know :-)

[gildedage]

Dang. And I am usually a religious girl about doing that.

[imafarmgirl]

What a great and creative story! I hope they live happily ever after.

[gildedage]

You bet they do! Thanks for commenting!