dearest invisible pink unicorn,

I have a series of vignettes that I need readers for. I'm at a point where I'm getting tunnel vision in regards to order. please please please, send me readers! I will sacrifice all my left socks to you if you provide, through your all powerful benevolence, at least 10 good readers for me.

amen

Dangling hearts, threaded by an everlasting string,

Sway with the beat of her breath.

Supple movements allude to the persuasion of grace and death,

As her coarse desire dismisses his rhythm’s illusionary cling.

My string of time is worn, her breaths evanesce, and yet my heart continues dangling.

Scissors of respite rupture the intertwined ( Read more... )

Take a Bite by Me (enigmacyofme ( Read more... )

Meaningless by Me (POCA ( Read more... )

Just Dust by enigmacyofme (me ( Read more... )

This poem sprung from a "which X-Men character would you be and why" conversation that's been around for a while here in Denver.  I submit it for the approval of the masses.

( They Call Me Forge )

My Mind is a Litterbox by Me (enigmacyofme ( Read more... )

Yellow and orange streaks ( Read more... )

Comments please?

There are no metaphors for loss

We talk and you put your hand over my wrist and I don't want
To seem unappreciative so I rest my other hand on yours
Only the fingertips and we walk and I touch your
Shoulder with the back of my hand I don't dare reach
With open palm and we hug as we say goodbye and your
Arms are gentle around me as I ( Read more... )

I don't know.  I think it's too disjoint.  Is there anything worth saving?  Some of the references seem obscure to me, I want to explain them further, but then I've been told I shouldn't spell things out in detail because that talks down to the reader, it's dull and boring.   A few perfect words should be enough, of course, but I know I'm not ( Read more... )