Where Do We Go (2/2)

Nov 24, 2009 22:31


Title: Where Do We Go (2/2)
Pairing: Lightman/Foster
Rating: NC-17
Summary: A man from Cal's past is bent on revenge and finds it during one late night at the Lightman Group building. Will his actions drive Cal and Gillian apart, or will they find a way to move forward together?
CONTENT WARNING: This story deals with dark themes and ( Read more... )

fanfic, lie to me

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tempe_brennandr December 15 2009, 02:44:53 UTC
I red this and commented it on ff.net (Ryanthorpe)
This is just one of the best stories... even though it delves into this dark side of what some sicko's do to get off.
But by the end I was back to normal again... cause when I first read the summary I was a bit hesitant to read, but as I read on, I was a flurry of emotions, anger, disgust, shame (yes Cal/Gillian adorn my desk top and I was finding it hard to look at them when I was almost half way through), a bit of embarrassment and a smidge of arousal...
But I just love how it didn't really work out to be one of those "I-Was-Just-Forced-To-Rape-My-Best-Friend-And-Now-She-Wont-Talk-To-Me fics.
It was just calming/reassuring to see that Gillian trusted Cal enough to know that he wasn't going to hurt her and she just opened up to him in that tiny moment, not that many Cal/Gillian shipper's would call it a moment, but it was just... wow!!! A very powerful piece of writing...

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her_pseudonym December 16 2009, 06:49:33 UTC
Thanks for your comments, both here and on ff.net. I can appreciate your mixed reactions to the story. It wasn't an easy one to write. I liked being able to find a light in the darkness, and the harrowing start made for a more hopeful end, I think.

I appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you thought. It means a lot.

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anr February 12 2010, 07:04:02 UTC
Nicely written and handled. Well done!

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chozen_rogue March 16 2010, 22:08:04 UTC
This was amazing and handled superbly. All of the characters were in character and the events seemed so real at times. An amazing read and definitely one of the harder ones I've experienced, but the ending was so worth it and believable!

Loved it.

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cosy_lil_corner June 14 2010, 00:46:18 UTC
OMG. I just have to say that no matter what I keep coming back to your fic. Angsty fiction normally makes me go like 'eww' so I normally don't do angst. The one just feels right and I see it happening with the characters, it's just that good.

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veradee June 17 2010, 01:12:04 UTC
Wow, this has to be one of the most emotionally draining fics I've ever read. The first part was downright painful to read because I could feel their desperation as if it were real. I'm very glad for the second part because it made me believe that they have a real chance to come to terms with what happened and even might be able to have a future together.

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