Feedback - Aoi/?, Aoi/everybody - 1/1

Jan 26, 2010 20:25

Title: Feedback
Rating: PG16
Chapters: 1/1
Pairing: Aoi/?, Aoi/everybody, Uruha/Reita/Kai
Warnings: nasty things in toilet pots
Symmary: Aoi decides to write a little something on the toilet wall.
Extra: For all the people on my friends list! So much awesome I can hardly stand.

Cubicle number two )

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n3uromanc3r January 26 2010, 19:05:14 UTC
Oh, priceless, I laughed so much while I read it! It's sick, but so amusing, and I know it will hunt me tomorrow, and I wont be able restrain myself to hold back my smile when I'll remember their crazy messages on the toilette wall again! >.<

... but Ruki and ladies’ bathroom ... why it doesn't surprise me at all?


... )

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heygeorge January 26 2010, 22:01:30 UTC
HAHAHAHA THANK YOU FOR READING! It is kind of nasty! But bathrooms are a part of or daily life, aren't they! Hahahaaa! Thank you so much!

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gratiela January 26 2010, 19:17:57 UTC
and he takes a good minute deciding what to write because he wants to be unique and clever too.

Hi. Aoi writes. Well, it sure wasn't unique nor clever, but it DID work!!!
(YES, I'M JUST FLOODING YOUR PAGE WITH LOVE!! )

SPANKING? Doesn't surprise me at all actually!

AND URUHA/REITA :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
(YES, REITA ROCKS! Besides- modesty is the quality of those who don't have any other qualities:P
And Ruha agrees with him!! ♥ (Uruha doesn't care about germs NOR about GERMS!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥ REAL MEN AREN'T!)

ahahahahaaha, WHICH MAKES RUKI EVEN MORE.. *cough. wait, I love the prissy brat :D*

FUUUU"£$%^^^CK!!!!!!!!! RUKI DREW AND LABELLED HIS COCK! IN A PUBLIC BATHROOM!!! I CAN SO SEE THAT HAPPENING IRL! O_o

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heygeorge January 26 2010, 22:08:04 UTC
♥♥♥♥!!!

Uruha IS the manliest out of all of them, after all, isn't he! Drawing little hearts next to his friend's name! Hahahahaa! Very manly!

Aoi makes all the right decisions. That "Hi." really lured poor manager in. Manager must be as desperate as Aoi ehehehe.

AHAHAHA RUKI HAHAHAHA YOU, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL THIS

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gratiela January 26 2010, 22:17:17 UTC
But manager-san is so funny!!!!! ♥ And adorable! he doesn't get near enough love as he deserves!!!!

YOU'RE DESERVING EVERY BIT OF LOVING! :DDDDDDD

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gratiela January 26 2010, 19:25:51 UTC
oh god KAI HAS A CRUSH ON REITAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! AND HE'S SUCH A DIRTY MAN!!! but everybody knows that!!! Except himself :DDD

(and I bet he feel somewhat proud that his pen is the tool for such sincere, though dirty and unexpected outbursts! :))))))))))

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heygeorge January 26 2010, 22:10:56 UTC
OF COURSE KAI HAS A CRUSH ON REITA. WHO WOULDN'T HAVE A CRUSH ON REITA!

(I'm pretty sure he actually doesn't regret letting his pen being used so well! Kai got some of his dirty secrets out to the open too, this way! Everybody wins!)

I wonder what Reita will think, seeing the hearts.... HAHAHEHEHE

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gratiela January 26 2010, 22:52:33 UTC
I for sure wouldn't be able to resist Reita!!!!!!!!!!!
(just remembered him telling that a girl should just address him with a simple "Neee" - as in "Hey! let's talk!" ♥

AHAHAHAHA, HE WOULD PROBABLY BE FLATTERED AND THEN A LITTLE TOO EMBARRASSED about the hearts!

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gratiela January 26 2010, 19:29:59 UTC
AOI/SAKAI SAKAI AOI DESERVE A COMMENT OF THEIR OWN!!!

THIS IS AMAZING, PIECE BY PEIECE, WORD BY WORD - A-MA-ZI-NG!
IN FACT, NO, THERE'S JUST NO WORD FOR IT!!!

I LOVE YOU AND YOU WONDERFULLY CRAZY MIND! ♥

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heygeorge January 26 2010, 22:13:53 UTC
AOI/MANAGER IS SO GOOD. AND SO REAL.

AND YOU ARE SO AMAZING FOR SUPPORTING ME LIKE THIS. THANK YOU, REALLY DEEP PRETTY THANK YOUS YOUR WAAAYYYYY, GRATI!

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gratiela January 26 2010, 22:55:58 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥♥
Moments like these make one appreciate life at it's fullest!

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kawasakininja January 26 2010, 19:39:29 UTC
WELL, FUCK ME! 12 comments already! You fucker, couldn't you I don't know mention you posted!

Oh, and fuck me I forgot to press Post Comment before going to read this!

AHAHAHHAH. THIS WAS BRILLIANT, DARLING! UTTERLY BRILLIANT! OF COURSE IT IS YOU WHO'LL BE THE ONE TO WRITE A FIC ABOUT AOI TAKING A DUMP! OH, GOD. IT WAS PERFECT. NO, IT REALLY WAS. THE CALIBER OF ORGY AND SMELL FIC! GOD, THE REPETITION, THE REPETITION AND THE REPETITION KILLED ME. I WAS LAUGHING ON THE INSIDE THROUGH THE WHOLE WAY BUT I TOTALLY GAVE UP WHEN I GOT TO THE KAI PART. I HAD TO LAUGH OUT LOUD. BRILLIANT, SO MUCH IN CHARACTER! AOIXMANAGER FINALLY! FORGET ABOUT REITA (SERIOUSLY, SUCH A PREDICTABLE CREATURE!) YOU ROCK! RUKI'S COCK! ROFLMAO! AND I KNOW THAT SECOND HEART IS JUST THERE SO YHUE WOULDN'T KILL YOU :P

HEYGEORGE ♥

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yhue January 26 2010, 19:50:52 UTC
I know, right. I was getting out my castration tools at first.

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heygeorge January 26 2010, 22:18:15 UTC
You know I could never do that to you. Well, mostly never. YOU made me write it in the first place. You are the only thing that is forcing making me write these days, leggy. OuO

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gratiela January 26 2010, 20:37:03 UTC
I don't think I've EVER seen you so excited!!!!!!!!!!!! ♥

GEORGE, YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE OF THIS!!!!

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