Feedback - Aoi/?, Aoi/everybody - 1/1

[heygeorge]

Title: Feedback
Rating: PG16
Chapters: 1/1
Pairing: Aoi/?, Aoi/everybody, Uruha/Reita/Kai
Warnings: nasty things in toilet pots
Symmary: Aoi decides to write a little something on the toilet wall.
Extra: For all the people on my friends list! So much awesome I can hardly stand.

Comments

[heygeorge]

I think it's ABOUT TIME managers get involved. Especially with Aoi. I've hoped for the day of someone writing a fic about these two (because hey, have you read manager's blogs! It's all over the place there!) but tough luck!

The first poop-related sentence that got me hooked!
HAHAHA DO YOU REALIZE HOW GOOD THIS SOUNDS AHHAHAA

I know! I recalled that song too! I love that song!
Basically. Thank you SO much for reading and commenting!

[domesticshit]

Ruki has been using the ladies’ bathroom across the hallway this far, because as far as he is concerned, there are germs and germs, and then there are germs and germs and men’s public bathrooms certainly has the latter.

lmfao, why am i not surprised. |:!

Ruki has the hardest time of the day maneuvering inside the cubicle without letting his skin come to actual contact with anything.

his face = ಠ_ಠ :D
i had to make that face once i came to the part about the manager. even as i was laughing, an "OMGWUT" slipped out, sending me into more giggling fits. WHERE DID THIS AWESOMENESS COME FROM? :V♥

lame comment is pretty lame, but i'm kind of sick and can't think straight atm. T_T

[heygeorge]

AHHAHHAHAA HOW COME IT IS LIKE THIS. NOBODY seems to mind Ruki using the ladies' restroom! HAHAHA, RUKI! He needs to work on his manly a bit!

ಠ_ಠ is totally the face of a germ-phobic Ruki! Fits so well!
And it actually makes me really excited to hear about your reaction to the manager part! AWESOME!
And I only gather and learn things from the people around me. LJ is such a wonderful place sometimes I just don't know!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, even when you aren't feeling so good! I hope you get better! Drink tea! Eat garlic and oranges! Thank you!

[shiroi_lace]

THIS. |D

[heygeorge]

|B THANKS!

[unna_rainchaser]

THIS FUCKING THIS IS THE BEST CRACK I EVER READ XD

This is brilliant!

Oh good gods Ruki XDDDD

[heygeorge]

HHH THANK YOU I'm really happy to hear this from you!!

Ruki is such a quirky man, isn't he. :D Thank you for reading and commenting!!

[unna_rainchaser]

I do have an inner Ruki myself, maybe caused by my shortness or whatever. I change haircolor like clothes and please don't ever ask me to draw something tiny onto someone birthday card because no one could add their signature on it woo once I'm done.

And then, there's my massive ego.

[heygeorge]

HAHAHA INNER RUKI! I wonder if I could use that in a story once...where Aoi discovers his inner Ruki... one day when he is coming out of the bathtub and sexily flips his hair back and... hmmm.... :D

AHHAAHA yes I can see how that Fuck-you-I-don't-do-tiny can be SO Rukish.
Awesome, awesome. :D

[melinen]

That... was awesome. XD All those little confessions and then it ends up being the manager who responded to Aoi. I lol'd to myself when I reached the end.

Anyway, I really like your writing style. Especially the use of repetition was nice. And you wrote a great fic with the theme of toilets... I mean, usually you never see (read) people actually going to the toilet in fics and being descriptive about what they do in there, but it all works really well in this one. :D

Also, consider yourself invited to petite_nuit, a new community dedicated to anything writing and fanfiction related. You can find the invite from your profile (under Communities) but whether or not you'll accept it is totally up to you.

[heygeorge]

Holy-! OF COURSE I will accept! Thank you for inviting me! This is awesome!

And an average person spends FIVE YEARS of their life sitting on toilet pots, so I figure it is certainly something to write about! Especially when it includes some dirty wall scribbling! Ohohoh!

THANK YOU! I was so surprised! Thank you for reading and leaving these kind words! I really means a lot! :))

[heygeorge]

You know, it's totally weird but even though I accepted the invitation, I still can't see any of the entries? Or am I not supposed to see them yet? I don't know. :D

[melinen]

That's weird. o.o You should be able to see them right away after accepting the invitation... I wonder what I should do about it. o.o Maybe if you'd try joining again, would that help? We can try it if you want.