Come On In

[hottielibrarian]

Erica was changing back into her street clothes in the locker room after another soul-crushing, alienating day.  She was beyond tired, near-catatonic in her drowsiness.  Her body just wanted to fall into a bed, preferably with a Callie in it.  Her frustration with everyone around her wearied her until she couldn't even be angry anymore.

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Comments

[chepis]

Excellent job, you really make me feel the pain they were feeling. I like that you wrote a sort of continuation of the scene because I was not happy with how they handle it on the show, among many other things.
Also there was no way that Erica was 'okay' with Callie sleeping with Sloan, I mean who would be okay with that; maybe just maybe a kiss can be 'okay' but having sex with them that is not cool. But I think that Callie shouldn't have accepted the"okay" answer from the beggining. First: when George slept with Izzie she wasn't okay even thought they didn't broke up when she found out and second: look how their relationship ended. So I believe that both of them made a mistake, Callie for accepting that kind of answer and Erica for not expressing how she truly felt, hence their drifting apart but hey what would be life without a little angst in the middle.

She was being punished, she knew. Something was amiss in the universe when Callie wasn't allowed to rip Erica's clothes off. Okay I love that line, it put a big grin in my

[hottielibrarian]

I agree, I was devastated by how the show handled most of their relationship.
I never believed Erica was okay with Callie sleeping with Sloan or that Callie would even sleep with Sloan after being with Erica. Just another example of the horrible writing they were given.
Yeah, they knew they weren't okay, but they weren't talking about it yet.
I love Callie too. She finally realized what she wanted, which was always Erica, and had to win her back, whatever crazy tactics she had to use.
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave such sweet, detailed comments. It means so much to me, you have no idea!

[sararamirezfan1]

I so loved this..beautiful job:-)

[hottielibrarian]

Thank you so much!! Thank you for reading!

[whitelder]

I <3 this! how it SHOULD have been!

[hottielibrarian]

I know--I wish this is how it had happened on the show!! I still have ABC so much. Thanks for reading! I love that icon--I can't stop staring at it.

[iluvcallie]

I really, really, really enjoyed this story. It has the right amount of angst and love. And since I love Coldplay, even better. I really needed to read a good Callica story, I've been missing them.
Thank you.

[hottielibrarian]

I still miss Callica and needed to rewrite their ending. I'm relieved to hear the angst and love kinda balanced out. I love Coldplay too! Thanks so much for reading and the sweet feedback!

[fast_chicken]

Wow, that was AWESOME, how it should have been. ABC sucks.
I love your writing!

[hottielibrarian]

I know!!! I wish to God this is how it had happened. I still hate ABC! I'll always hate ABC for what they did. Thank you for reading!!!