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crazymaryt in house_of_sap

Moving Forward

May 25, 2009 19:05

Fandom: Lewis
Title: Moving Forward
Spoilers: up to 2.04 The Great and The Good
Rating: M just to be safe but it really needs a sap rating of way too much LOL ( Read more... )

lewis, author: crazymaryt

Comments 19

duckface666 May 26 2009, 00:48:26 UTC

All I can do right now is squeel with joy!!
I promise to review this properly in the morning :) xx

crazymaryt May 26 2009, 01:05:55 UTC

Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Now I'm going to try to do me some more Robbie fics. He really needs them. LOL

rebecca2525 May 26 2009, 11:25:19 UTC

Aw, that's cute!

I'm normally very faithful to my OTPs, and my OTP is the one with the other H, but I really enjoyed reading this!

crazymaryt May 26 2009, 22:17:30 UTC

Thanks for taking a look since it wasn't your ship. I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

philleegirl May 26 2009, 11:36:55 UTC

YAY!! I've been waiting for this. I'm a huge Laura/Robbie shipper (was even back in the last few Morse, but now it is guilt free). This was wonderful and I loved the way he kissed her and the poor uniform officer finding them. I do feel a little bad for Hathaway... I doubt Lewis will be all that kind when he gets there.

crazymaryt May 26 2009, 22:21:54 UTC

Yay for fellow Laura/Robbie shipper. I tend to ship Robbie with any female he shares time with. LOL I've thought of possibly doing a sequel with what happens with Jim and then what happens when he gets back to his flat. Thank you for reading.

mcicioni May 26 2009, 12:52:07 UTC

Your Laura is a delight: fortright, warm, funny and sexy. And your Robbie is in character and has a sense of humour. I really liked the story even though I belong to the Lewis/Hathaway camp.

crazymaryt May 26 2009, 22:23:39 UTC

And your Robbie is in character and has a sense of humour.

Thank you so much for this comment. This is one thing I really want to do when I write Robbie. Thank you again for checking out the other L/H.

lullabymoon May 26 2009, 20:01:12 UTC

Very nice! Well written and the interaction between the two o them was good. Loved the bit at the end with Innocent on the phone.

Just one thing though, 'pants' are called trousers in the UK. Didn't affect the story though , it just made me pause for a moment.

crazymaryt May 26 2009, 22:25:09 UTC

Thank you for reading. I had to have Innocent mess things up. I just think some force of nature would do it. :-)

As for the pants that could just be American girl wishful thinking since I wrote this in first person and I love, love, love Kevin Whately. LOL