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vespiquen8 October 30 2011, 23:44:16 UTC
Awwww, the beginning was so cute, I too also love the scenes where they wake up together. Something about them is just so "magical"? I don't know.

Anyways, I totally did not expect for Sam to try and steal Smosh. Before, I was guessing that the movie was fake and that after they filmed, they would be blackmailed with it or something. I wasn't even close. :0 And Anthony IS SUCH a idiot for not reading the thingie. I would never do that. Good thing Ian is smart.

Sooooo, awesome chapter :D. Pleaseee post chapter 9 soon, especially after you put that annoying cliff hanger at the end :p

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hvnlyumbrlla October 31 2011, 01:50:26 UTC
Ugh, I know! I could write about them cuddling naked in bed all day *.*

:D I've had this idea from the beginning. I kinda hinted at it when he made the comment about getting money for coming up with the name (long time ago, chapter 2? 3?). Yes, Anthony was quite the moron but I thought Ian should have his moment of intelligence ;)

Thank you! I'll try :)

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michaelangelo24 October 31 2011, 00:41:20 UTC
Oooh, did they do something special last night? ;D I want the juicy details. :P
I wondered what Sam was up to, but I never suspected he would try and steal Smosh.

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hvnlyumbrlla October 31 2011, 01:53:10 UTC
I'm sure you can probably guess ;)hehe! Maybe one day I'll write a smutty one-shot that can be inserted between the last two chapters. It's just, I've never written anything like that so I fear I would be terrible at it xD BUT maybe I'll try my hand at the juicy details?

Glad I surprised y'all :D

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michaelangelo24 October 31 2011, 02:03:07 UTC
When I first tried smut, I wasn't sure if it would turn out very good, but it worked out in the end. You won't know until you try it. :)

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hvnlyumbrlla October 31 2011, 22:56:41 UTC
Yeahhhh I'll get to it one day xD

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mutual_death October 31 2011, 02:52:41 UTC
I nearly had a heart attack when I saw that you updated. [= Tehehe...I disobeyed all speed limit laws and raced home (so I could be alone) to read this!! It was definitely worth the risk. ;)

The scene of them waking up together had me fanning my face. Since you gave no details, I sat staring for a good five minutes coming up with my own version of events (I'm such a perv). Seriously, it gave me butterflies and it was really cute.

Damn, I can't believe Sam was a jerk. I thought he was just a pervert. :P I thought Ian would find something suspicious...like Sam was really filming a gay porno. (I must be in quite a mood this week, sigh). Errr...why did you have to leave the story like this?! Please tell me another chapter is coming up soon!!!

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mutual_death October 31 2011, 02:54:35 UTC
lol@your location!

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hvnlyumbrlla October 31 2011, 23:00:41 UTC
HEY! No breaking laws or I'll smack you -.-
Ugh the morning scene was so fun to write. Psh, you're not a perv, I do the same thing. Like I said earlier, maybe when the whole story is over I'll work on a one-shot which can be added in ;) until then, fantasize away! (maybe you can even help me lolz)
HAHAH that would be hilarious! Sam totally seems like the gay porno type. But I'm glad everyone was surprised, hopefully new chapter soon. I'LL TRY! I REALLY WILL

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mutual_death November 1 2011, 07:12:51 UTC
No! Don't smack me, I'm sensitive! :P

I'd definitely love a one-shot of this. Ian's post-fun thoughts were much too intriguing to not explain. Unless you like slowly torturing me... -puppy dog eyes-

I doubt you'll need help (you're talented enough on your own) but I'm here if you need me. [=

Please tell me there is a gay porno clause...and Anthony has to do it since he's a big dummy, and Ian gets jealous and sleeps with Anthony's brother, then someone gets amnesia and recovers, Ian discovers he has an evil twin, and Boxman is -gasp- pregnant?!?! Because that would make my life.

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darkestb_4dawn October 31 2011, 03:01:58 UTC
Interesting, very interesting. Wonderful, by the way. The beginning was so adorable. This contract thing was something I did not see coming.
Much love, Jenn

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hvnlyumbrlla October 31 2011, 23:01:24 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad you found it cute and stuff :D

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hvnlyumbrlla October 31 2011, 23:02:43 UTC
THANK YOUU!! :)
I'll have to make sure that Ian dishes out the shit on Sam, just for you ;)

Lol, Anthony had to have a stupid moment. Ian will smack him around later for it xP

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