Just Kidding

Dec 07, 2011 17:09


Title: Just Kidding
Pairings: Ian/ Anthony
Rating/Warnings: It's clean, yo! Angsty, but clean.
Summary: Why would he ever even dare to say it, when he knows the reaction he’ll receive?
A/N: Here's the story (it's actually quite funny): my friend recently found out I write slash ff (SHE DOES TO, I WOULD HAVE NEVER GUESSED!) and she told me that I should ( Read more... )

g, poetry, fanfiction, slash, angst

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Comments 24

ihanoverian December 7 2011, 23:03:02 UTC
*MIND BLOWN*

Seriously, the words and descriptions.... *shivers* In a good way, of course! This was phenomenal. Just stunning. The flow of it, the feelings, the word choices and diction. WOW SERIOUSLY.

OH. Skrillex = win.
:3

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hvnlyumbrlla December 8 2011, 00:47:28 UTC
Why thank you! I don't often do poetry but I felt like this one wasn't half bad. Plus I didn't even attempt at rhyming or anything xD

You always leave awesome comments <333 I'm so very glad you enjoyed.

NOW GET TO WRITING YOUR NEW, AWESOME STORY! ;)

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hvnlyumbrlla December 8 2011, 01:35:52 UTC
AND WOOOO GO SKRILLEX! :3 wubwubwubwub

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hvnlyumbrlla December 8 2011, 00:58:00 UTC
I gave it to my teacher (as a first draft) and she said I should continue it. Her comments were like: WHAT?!? WHAT HAPPENS NOW! WRITING MORE, I DEMAND YOU! Lol, she's awesome :3

Awww dang it! *quickly goes up to fix it*. But obviously, Ian's eyes are special and thus the pupils are blue not black. DUH! ;P

Thank you for the comment, I'm glad it affected you as a reader. Achievement unlocked, WOOP! :D

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9800andseagulls December 8 2011, 00:20:51 UTC
WELL I HATED IT

just kidding ;3

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hvnlyumbrlla December 8 2011, 00:59:10 UTC
YOU SCARED ME FOR A SECOND! Hahahaha, you nugget! :P

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9800andseagulls December 8 2011, 01:02:53 UTC
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ;) i absolutely loved it :'D. I just realized I didn't really say anything else, but yeah, it was super!

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hvnlyumbrlla December 8 2011, 01:09:39 UTC
Hahahah, thank you! *dances spastically*

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vespiquen8 December 8 2011, 01:59:34 UTC
I really liked it :D I can't write poetry at all so this was nice to read :DD

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hvnlyumbrlla December 8 2011, 02:25:23 UTC
Thank yous! I haven't had much experience with it...this was beginners luck xP

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michaelangelo24 December 8 2011, 02:14:40 UTC
Well your poem doesn't seem like nonsense to me, like most poetry does, so that means it was good. xP

Lol, I see I'm not the only one to sneaks bits of Ianthony into my writing for school. I wrote a story for creative writing that had two gay men with similar names to Ian and Anthony, as well as a poem about them for my poetry class. :P

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hvnlyumbrlla December 8 2011, 02:26:40 UTC
WELL, that's a good sign! xD

Hehe yeahhhh, I've been wanting to for awhile now because I have a Writing Class. It makes school so much more enjoyably when you can sneak some slash in :)

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