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i_am_davnee

Ficlet: Kiss the Rain

Feb 15, 2009 10:36

Title: Kiss the Rain
Author: Davnee
Rating: K+
Summary: A quick sketch of the first conversation Bill and Laura ever had about her cancer. Set on Kobol. With inspiration from the deleted scene from Home pt. 2. Special thanks to the wonderful and indispensable unavitasegreta for making this little piece finally work.

( Kiss the Rain ... )

adama/roslin, fanfic, bsg

Comments 55

hugamoose February 16 2009, 05:35:21 UTC

That was a really sweet piece loved it!

i_am_davnee February 16 2009, 14:12:38 UTC

Positive feedback is positively fabulous! :) Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you liked it.

captaintish February 16 2009, 05:39:54 UTC

Very nice. I especially like the last couple of lines. "Maybe it will blow over quickly" "Get used to it. This is only the beginning." Like foreshadowing for the ENTIRE show. :)

i_am_davnee February 16 2009, 14:14:21 UTC

Yeah, I was trying not to be TOO obvious with that, but I couldn't help myself. LOL! I'm just glad it didn't blow over quickly for those two. :)

childminerva February 16 2009, 05:46:17 UTC

This was quite beautiful. I love it.

i_am_davnee February 16 2009, 14:15:01 UTC

Aww, thanks! It felt good to write again. Glad you liked it.

bytesofspencer February 16 2009, 11:32:48 UTC

Awww, that was a sweet little moment. Thanks. :)

i_am_davnee February 16 2009, 14:15:41 UTC

You're welcome! :)

danceswithcows1 February 16 2009, 19:21:31 UTC

Yay! Davnee fic! I am always stunned with how dead on you are with regards to character. For me, that's the hardest thing to do.

i_am_davnee February 16 2009, 23:41:03 UTC

Aww, shucks, thank you ma'am! I'm glad you saw this little vignette as in character. I like to think of their reunion on Kobol as the first step they took toward falling in love.