The Truth I Chose for You

Jun 25, 2008 00:26

Title: The Truth I Chose for You
Author: jbs_teeth
Rating: R
Genre: Romance
Summary: "When he kisses Ianto for the first time, Jack knows he's been lied to."
Notes: Post-Fragments, pre-series. No actual spoilers, per se, though probably not quite as meaningful without knowledge of "Cyberwoman" and "Fragments". Thank you very much to the extremely helpful betas ( Read more... )

fanfiction, torchwood, ianto/jack, jack harkness

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mrsiantojones_x June 25 2008, 19:43:39 UTC
whoah that was amazing. I loved how you had the end at the begining, so us readers knew what was going to happen. I thought that was one of the best one shots I've read in a while and that's saying something :)

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jbs_teeth June 25 2008, 21:02:01 UTC
Yep, that's saying something. Thank you: it's quite a compliment!

So glad you enjoyed reading it, and thanks for commenting.

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faithharkness June 25 2008, 19:48:06 UTC
That was spectacularly sensual. I didn't realize I was holding my breath until I let it out at the end. Nicely done!

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jbs_teeth June 25 2008, 21:00:32 UTC
First off, I'll take that coffee if you don't mind!

Secondly, thank you so much for reading. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

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faithharkness June 25 2008, 21:01:45 UTC
Hee! You can have the coffee; I'll take the Ianto.

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jbs_teeth June 25 2008, 21:21:45 UTC
Damn you! I didn't know that was my other option! Crap.

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snglesrvngfrend June 25 2008, 20:41:45 UTC
Jeez this was gorgeous. Perfect, slow descent into pleasure. I had no idea knees and ankles could be so sexy, but you made it so. Absolutely wonderful job.

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jbs_teeth June 25 2008, 20:59:37 UTC
There's a scene in the movie "The Age of Innocence" (which is terribly Victorian in its sensibilities) where Daniel Day Lewis takes off Michelle Pfeiffer's glove and kisses the inside of her wrist. It. Was. Hot. (I even wrote a poem about it during my first semester of college [yikes: 1993].)

This is when I learned that anything can be sexy.

Thank you so much for reading, and for taking the time to comment!

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jbs_teeth June 25 2008, 22:18:39 UTC
Thank you so much.

Although I tried very concertedly not to make this as dark as the Ianto-seduces-Jack-to-divert-him-from-Lisa fics, there's no way around the fact that it's a sad situation in general. Poor, Ianto. It's so hard for him.

I'm a little more interested in GDL's toes, but I figure Jack for an ankle man. ;)

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merucha June 25 2008, 21:47:12 UTC
This is probably one of the best pre-Cyberwoman fics I've ever read. It just sounds right. Ianto and Jack seduce each other; neither is a victim or a victimizer. It's one of the reasons I think they are equals in their relationship.

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jbs_teeth June 25 2008, 22:23:16 UTC
I cannot tell you what a great compliment I find this to be. I *love* a good pre/post Cyberwoman fic, so that really means a lot to me.

I'm actually in the middle of a lengthy episode-style piece, and I never really intended to write this. But I was inspired by discussion, and I'm so pleased it turned out so well.

Thank you!

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