Fanfic: Not So Unexpected (Complete)

[jillfox22]

I've been away from livejournal for a few years now so sorry if any of the links are bad, I'm having to re-learn everything.

This post pops my fic cherry:-)

Title: Not So Unexpected
Fandom: Star Trek
Pairing: Kirk/Spock pre-slash
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Spanking/Discipline
Disclaimer: I'm just playing in Paramount's universe. I don't own the boys and

Comments

[mangst]

This was adorable and fun. :)

[jillfox22]

Thank You:-) It was fun to write as well.

[gail19]

It always hurts more when you have to admit to being in the wrong.

Delightful.

[jillfox22]

Totally.

Thank you:)

[jillfox22]

Yes probably not Jim's finest moment...although..;-)

[ficwriterjet]

That was fantastic. Really well written. I can picture Spock's utter shock and immediate physical reaction to Kirk biting/sucking on his wrist. LOL Poor unsuspecting Spock. I loved getting inside Kirk's head to hear his thoughts on what was happening. His nervous dread on what was undoubtedly going to happen once Spock got ahold of him, and his struggle to admit his own guilt was very well done. I especially enjoyed that he broke down into emotional tears. Wonderful ending with Kirk asking Spock if he'd like to join him. :)

[jillfox22]

Oh god did I really write this 7 years ago! Thank you for the generous feedback. This was my first attempt at writing and I found it so difficult. At the time I was just lucky to hear their voices straight away and was unemployed so had the time to stare at a blank screen and chip away at it.

[ficwriterjet]

LOL - I know what you mean. I have stories that I wrote over ten years ago. They kind of make me cringe now when I see them.

Your story was fantastic for a first attempt. :) Ah yes, as a writer, being out of work sounds kind of awesome.