Mystery Showcase

[jojofries]

Here is a little taste of the mystery story I've been working up:

Murder on the Menu

by J. Fries

It was a hot night and the air was thick and heavy, it seemed almost liquid. As I walked the atmosphere seemed to stick to me and weigh me down, like walking through a city-sized sauna

Comments

hi/hello.

[anonymous]

jojo the fries has done it again (i'm refering about your pretty story). i like part about the dentist! please can write of mores.

Re: hi/hello.

[jojofries]

Some night it will be!

-J. Fries

Laughing at you, with you.

[anonymous]

You are the best at writing that story! I can tell that you've been given a gift, most likely every Christmas and birthday, unless your family sucks. If they do, sorry to hear about your shitty family.

Re: Laughing at you, with you.

[jojofries]

My family was killed in Vietnam. By cancer.

-J. Fries

[plinko]

Mmmmmmm. A detective story with some CHUNK in it.

That is a story I can get my head around.

Except, not really all the way around.

Since he is so fucking FAT!

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[jojofries]

To be fair his weight problem is glandular. His glands are so fucking fat.

-J. Fries

[ex_motel666812]

I'm gonna eat some chocolate cake, then I want to read more of this story.

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxox

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[jojofries]

Once I have perfected my recipe for hog leg cake I will share it with you.

-J. Fries

[king_kai]

awesome. 9 thumbs up.

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[jojofries]

The urine cost me that tenth thumb, didn't it? Still, nine thumbs is pretty good.

-J. Fries