Worse [Raven; LJ Idol season 9, week 11]

[joyfulfeather]

Four new cuts, none of them deep enough to need stitches. Bruised ribs. Sprained wrist. Dani treated all of Allison's new wounds with care, then checked the older ones. The deep slice on her back, with stitches which Allison had somehow managed not to tear this time. The bullet graze on her left forearm. The rope burns on her throat and hand. Dani

Comments

[whipchick]

I really liked this character last time around, and I'm glad to read more! I like that you have a sense of humor in these pieces - it's hero-stuff, but they don't take themselves too seriously.

[joyfulfeather]

Thank you! :D I love these two, and I'm glad you like them, too!

[spacefiend]

Aw, I definitely like!

[beeker121]

I really like the relationship these two have, it's respectful of what they're each doing but not worshipful. The dialog in this is really good especially "A tsunami is a wave". Brilliant comeback.

[kajel]

I really love these! Just in case I hadn't already mentioned that. ;)

[catwomon]

I like this one.