Comments | kitariii: skating on ice; onkey; pg-13

kitariii

skating on ice; onkey; pg-13

Feb 01, 2011 14:08

skating on ice
Author: kitariii
Pairing: Onew/Key
Genre: Fluff

( Just keep on gliding but don’t glide too fast, remember to control yourself because if not then you’d end up either losing your balance and falling or you’d smack straight onto the walls of the rink. There are boundaries that you just can’t pass. )

pairing: onew/key, fandom: shinee, fanfic

Comments 30

kitariii February 1 2011, 06:17:27 UTC

SPOT FOR manongeunhyuk ♥

manongeunhyuk February 1 2011, 16:59:32 UTC

I read it after arriving from school. WHY WERE YOU ABSENT AGAIN??? and I envy you a lot since I've haven't even stepped on an ice skate rink. :(
Anyways this was so COOL! You compared ice skating to love perfectly! But I wished that Jinki was a little less discreet since Kibum couldn't come across the hidden meaning behind it. I LOVE IT ♥

kitariii February 5 2011, 16:27:34 UTC

You should try ice skating bb, it's really fun! B)
Aww thanks, and actually that was the whole point of it. It was an open ending, but the message is passed. I'm glad that you loved it? oh really now lololol ♥

belintuchiha February 1 2011, 07:02:56 UTC

asdfdsfdasf OMG OMG OMG I LOVEEE THE PLAY OF WORDS HERE!
I was replacing love in every skate word XDDD lol omg I loved the metaphor! asddsfsdf so cute I don't even!
thanks for writing another amazing onkey fic ;A; im happy!
memories! kkkk

belintuchiha February 1 2011, 07:05:06 UTC

wait I don't have the option to put this in memories ;A;
help me lol

kitariii February 5 2011, 16:30:03 UTC

Aww, thanks so much for reading bb.
I'm absolutely happy to know that you loved the play of words. It was actually how I meant it to be, glad that you understood it ^^
Thanks so much~ You don't know how much encouragement your comment has given me.
Oh and as for the memories, wow I'm honored. :'D I changed the settings so now you can add things in memories on the bar on top ^^

belintuchiha February 5 2011, 21:07:26 UTC

yaaay haha thank u :D now it's on memories, seriously
I love this story, no need to thank me ! :D

runawaylane February 1 2011, 07:22:10 UTC

this is so beautiful. i love the last paragraph (': makes me feel like learning how to skate XD

kitariii February 5 2011, 16:31:19 UTC

♥ ♥
Glad to know that you liked it and found it beautiful, thanks so much bb.
Oh and, you should really try ice skating. It's easy to learn and is really fun once you get along with it! :3

melalocket February 1 2011, 08:12:10 UTC

i love this!!!
jinki is soo wise >.<

kitariii February 5 2011, 16:34:15 UTC

Thanks for reading, dear ♥
Yes, I believe that his character in here was a metaphor to a wise man. :') I just don't know if I was able to portray it well sobs

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kitariii February 5 2011, 16:36:49 UTC

and i still assumed that this story isn't finish
cos despite that we know what jinki intention was, kibum is clueless?
It was an open-ending, yes. I'm glad that you were able to catch a gist of that part that despite Jinki's actions, Kibum had no reply.

How I wish to continue this but I feel that this is how it should be. Thanks so much for reading bb ♥