I hate the last chapter of "The Balance of Power."
Hate, hate, hatehatehatehatehatehate!
This is exactly what I was afraid would happen; all this buildup, all this intrigue, all these damn threads, and I can't seem to figure out how to tie them up in a way that doesn't suck!
I'm on my second draft of it, and I think I'm both overwriting and
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