I don't normally read YJ fic mostly because I'm a hugeass fic snob which is kind of wrong, I know, but I happened to come across a tweet that mentioned you and well... I needed to see for myself and wow did you not disappoint
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gack I didn't even talking about the open ending which I think is just brilliant!! I like realistic stories, granted how realistic can fan fiic be right? :D I'm just not a huge fan of the overly fluffy over romantic happily every after ending so I was so pleased that there was no definite closure to the ending.
Seriously doll, this was fantastic! I would not be opposed to a third part through Yoona's point of view as she plans their wedding LOL
This is just so beautiful... The emotions are so well-displayed.. And yunho's frustration, his late realization, confession and he made up with Jae.. It all seemed so real, how he had a key to his house, how its all familiar until he saw another man's clothes... How he reacted... Yeah, I love it
And I love how jae just finally finally /FINALLY/ exploded. Yeah, Yunho needed to hear that, and see that...
But as much as I love the YunJae, I can't simply be happy for them, there is still a little part of me thinking that yoona didn't deserve this, hope though she'll understand, cause my ending would be yun breaking up with her, so she could find someone who can give her a white house and 2 children :')
And my dear, your writing is not just up to par, it actually sits the par high for others... Your writing is simply gorgeous &hearts
awh darling, ilysfm ♥ I also agree with you in the way that Yunho's & Jaejoong's relationship is pretty much self-destructive in the sense that even though Yunho loves him, he may not leave Yoona & Jaejoong will remain just being on the sidelines. But love will so this to people D;
thank you so much for being wonderful, I adore you so much! ♥
omg this angst writing had me pouring in agony! ;_______________________; fuck, i really wanted to punch yunho during the whole thing and slap jaejoong a couple of times for not saying anything. then when it he happy ending came, i just wanted to lock them in that room- in bed forever 8'DD
i think this turned out well with the angst and since you struggled so much to regain back your touch ;___; it was so goooood ;; i'll never be able to do this! OTL (not an angst writer)
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Seriously doll, this was fantastic! I would not be opposed to a third part through Yoona's point of view as she plans their wedding LOL
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And I love how jae just finally finally /FINALLY/ exploded. Yeah, Yunho needed to hear that, and see that...
But as much as I love the YunJae, I can't simply be happy for them, there is still a little part of me thinking that yoona didn't deserve this, hope though she'll understand, cause my ending would be yun breaking up with her, so she could find someone who can give her a white house and 2 children :')
And my dear, your writing is not just up to par, it actually sits the par high for others... Your writing is simply gorgeous &hearts
Just loved it :')
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thank you so much for being wonderful, I adore you so much! ♥
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i think this turned out well with the angst and since you struggled so much to regain back your touch ;___; it was so goooood ;; i'll never be able to do this! OTL (not an angst writer)
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