Rules; Love Game

May 23, 2012 06:12


Rules; Love Game
JaeJoong&Yunho
Romance, Drama, Angst
Jaejoong & Yunho play a love game.

A sequel to Rules; Love & Desire
{Song used;  ♫Suggestions by Orelia Has Orchestra
heart breaks & goodbye kisses )

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alice03tina December 27 2012, 13:32:26 UTC
not actually necessarily to comment it since I`ve been so late .. but just so you know, it`s heart brokenly beautiful
and you deserved to get this little love from me ^^
thanks for writing and sharing, my dear :)

-Alice

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krisooh December 4 2013, 05:08:56 UTC
awh! thanks for commenting either way! (: I'm so very flattered. thank you so much darling♥

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ligerliger May 12 2013, 06:32:09 UTC
love this and the original. so morbid and twisted and the way they get so wrapped up in each other that they disregard everything and blindly focus on each other--it's so intense. they've fallen too deep in their desire to consider the morals and wow... it's just so amazing *___*
I'm glad they were still together in the end despite the unhealthiness but to me, it seemed like an appropriate ending... Yunho wouldn't be able to stay away and Jaejoong wouldn't deny him either.... ah so twisted~
I love the way you wrote it all btw.... the bold, underlining, the strikethroughs~ they looked like remnants of a frustrated writer... speaking of which, the way you conveyed the emotion was flawless... you could feel every little touch, nuance, behind their actions... and they just continue to lose themselves even more.
I adore this lmao I love twisted fics like these *O*

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krisooh December 4 2013, 05:12:03 UTC
awh, thanks so much darling! Your comment brings joy to my heart, to be honest I WAS a frustrated writer. I wanted to just punch myself in the face with this one LOL. I feel speechless right now, I'm sorry. I really such a responding at comments because I'm just sdlkadkaldka;dk flailing all over the place. BUT THANK YOU SO MUCH, fro the bottom of my heart. I'm so truly happy you enjoyed my fic♥

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ligerliger December 4 2013, 12:44:38 UTC
Aww you're welcome!! ; v; I don't mind the flailing replies heehee xD

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believeinred February 9 2014, 15:56:38 UTC
I REALLY AM AN EMOTIONAL WRECK RIGHT NOW! SHIT! FIX ME PLEASE. asgfdgkjdfhnsf

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yjjyluv May 31 2014, 22:06:38 UTC
I feel Jae is so slutty and needy I mean Hyunjoong just fucked him and he let Yunho fucked him after that. Has he no shame ??? And Yunho is stupid too

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