possible week 2 entry. in progress.

[lacruciverbiste]

"You stupid fucking bitch!"

Steven barreled at me as the last word exploded from his mouth. His hand was around my neck before I could react. I felt his fingers coil and constrict like a python, felt the walls of my windpipe collapse and touch. I reached up and futilely clawed at his fingers, my bare feet tap-dancing on the hardwood floor. Black

Comments

[jellybeanchichi]

Excellent imagery.

[lisforliz]

Loved it. Very, very well written.

[attentionhoard]

*Applauds!*

Wow. Very, very strong piece of writing.

Good luck this week, you have an awesome entry!

[jamais_toujours]

This is amazing. You can really feel the main character's pain, especially in the first scene. Well done :).

[drippedonpaper]

This reminded me of the song "Independence Day" Sung by: Martina McBride.

You're great with description. I found the first part hard to read which means you're a great writer.

Thanks for sharing.