TM 232: Inappropriate Unkindness

[laura_muse]

 
(An OOC Note:

This prompt includes spoilers from the upcoming Battlestar Galactica episode "Sine Qua Non" and contains speculation into a certain event rumored to happen in the following episode "The Hub."

Also, just to be safe, I'd put the rating slightly below M.)

I awake slowly, drifting awake. Before I even registered that I was still on the

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[karuri]

oh.my.word.

*flails* That was cruel and unusual punishment. XD And it was so well done!!! Very cool

[larsfarm77]

The cruelest of endings, even though we do know what will happen ... right? right?

Wait ... Laura has visions, sees portends ... yes ... I'll go with that, she's just seen the future.

Lovely little fic -- can't WAIT for "The Hub"! Nice work Kate!

OOC

[laura_muse]

I don't think it's even crossed her mind that Bill would come looking for her himself. She's irritated because she can't even, in her mind, hope that what she's just gone through is a vision. She thinks it's her subconscious reminding her that she does love this man and she knows he loves her, but it is what it is.

Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it!

[lullabymoon]

Awesome! Well done and that ending was absolutely horrible. In a good way of course. :D

[csiangel]

Ooooh a cruel, but interesting twist at the end there. A beautiful moment between them though. Let's hope it really happens :-)

OOC

[laura_muse]

I love your avatar! Thank you so much for the feedback! I love your fics, so this is a definite boost for me!

[sapphs]

That was damn cruel :P But oh how i'm a glutton for punishment *goes to read again*

Brilliant work!