Of Swaggers, Saloons, And Star Badges - Chapter 11

[laure1724]

Title: Of Swaggers, Saloons, And Star Badges - Chapter 11
Character/Pairing: Jae/Min/Chun and variations of, minor one-sided YunChun, YooSu bffery
Genre: drama/angst, romance, and a bit of comedy and action, Korean Wild West AU!
Rating: PG-13 to be safe (for now)
Word Count: 1,496
Disclaimer: I have a what?

Previous parts: Prologue , Chapter 1 ,

Comments

[laure1724]

Spot! For english_01

[english_01]

*Act innocence*

Hello! xP

[english_01]

Hehehe. I'm feeling better again. (Yes, I was sick. It sucks) And the first thing I did after I get better is to read THIS! ^^

You have no idea how much I love this fic. *glomps* and yay! for motherhen!Su. So, JaeMinChun relationship is getting better huh? Well, this is interesting... You know, at first I thought that this will be a triangle love and one of the character will have to be in angst..but,you prove me wrong. *pats your back*

THIS IS EVEN FUCKING BETTER!!

now I will shamelessly click 'next' xP

[laure1724]

Awww, that is so sweet (I'm glad you're better!)

I can't do angst...I tried but I just like happy endings and threesomes so much more XD

Motherhen!Su is precious, I wish I could carry him around in my pocket.

[laure1724]

Spot! For okkitten

[bexy31]

Ahh, I love Changmin's thoughts about them!! ^__^ I'm so happy that he likes both Yoochun and Jaejoong, he he XD
I think Yoochun's reasoning was very good *nods* He does need to get to know them and whatnot~
Yay for them all living together! ^w^
Oh my God I love Junsu so so much XDD He's awesome *squishes him*
Can't wait for the next chapter! ^__^

[laure1724]

okay super ninja, I might as well leave a spot for you from now on XD
Yoochun is a very responsible young man now, so he needs to make good decisions *nods*
Junsu is a sweetie pie...I think I may make him the bad guy in my next fic....hmmmm
Next chapter will be up Friday *I have so much school work :/* and there will be smexing!

[laure1724]

I think living together will cause a different kind of tension between them - a sexy kind ;)

[laure1724]

exactly XD

(Hi~~~!)

[kay_dalle]

^^;;

Whoa! Great story you have going on here. I really liked this love triangle aproach, the way Yoochun's character has developed (I mean, him becoming braver and stronger) and the fact that you included a little GD(?), Yunho (even if he portrays one of the bad guys), the fantastic Kim brothers and Shis... err Siwon on this story *A*

Good job. I'll certainly, be looking forward to the next update(s)! ♥
Until friday then, kudos!!!
;D

~ kay dalle ~

P.S. Oh and totally love Junsu's "mothering mode"!
XD

Re: (Hi~~~!)

[laure1724]

Aww, thank you so much <3
I really worked hard on Yoochun's development, I glad it came across well :)
I really like evil Yunho and mothering Junsu as well. They are fun to write ^^

[kay_dalle]

I totally loved the fact that you're NOT stuck with an idea of how Yoochun "should be" trough the whole story and you let him "evolve" instead...

From where I stand -reader's POV- it looks pretty interesting (Ok. I'm starting to get repetitive... blame it on the fact that I'm awake past midnight, please?)

Hmmm who will he choose? WHO?!?
m(_ _)m

*bites nails*

~ kay dalle ~

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[laure1724]

Now you're just going to make me blush O///O
Maybe he doesn't have to choose >:D