fic: deus ex machina

Jul 16, 2011 00:21

Title: Deus Ex Machina [god in the machine]
Chapter: Ten
Author:  lifeawakening 
Words: 7,875
Rating: R (For future scary images, language, and sexual references)
Summary: Rachel Berry always knew that she was a little bit psychic. In fact, Rachel Berry thought she knew just about everything. That is, until a spirit that refused to die entered her life like a train- ( Read more... )

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plumbous July 16 2011, 09:47:45 UTC
I've been following you on tumblr in hopes of getting the update on this story, and there it was!
I honestly did not expect it to happen this way. I thought Rachel was just going to die, so I'm not sure if I am willing to accept that Rachel magically came back to life thanks to the power of science and possibly God. At least, not yet. But amazing story overall. Thank you for writing.

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lifeawakening July 18 2011, 18:10:45 UTC
Thank you so much for sticking with the story and reading :) I'm glad that you enjoyed the ending despite your hesitant feelings about the ending.

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Just wow phantasytrail July 16 2011, 11:31:48 UTC
Okay, I've been patiently waiting for the last chapter for a few days now, and I gotta say - It did NOT disappoint! =) You've truly created one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read and I'm so happy about how it ended!

I just wanted to thank you for writing this beautiful story and for sharing it with us all!

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Re: Just wow lifeawakening July 18 2011, 18:13:29 UTC
I'm so happy that you're happy with how it ended. Thank you so much for reading :)

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motylik July 16 2011, 12:46:20 UTC
Adkjdjaldkfjldjf. This was so amazing. I loved this story. I'm very sad to see it end, but I will definitely reread it often. It was amazing. :D :D Brava! :D

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lifeawakening July 18 2011, 18:16:42 UTC
I was sad to see it end as well, no worries lol thank you so much for reading!

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musingmarionete July 16 2011, 14:37:28 UTC
This fic was absolutely perfect. The writing was excellent, very few grammatical errors and the characters were not too OOC. My favorite part of the story was the interactions between Quinn and Rachel. You wrote those in such a way that I would have to pull back from my computer screen and clutch my heart. All in all this fic was such a unique and wonderful thing. I hope you write more faberry in the future.

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lifeawakening July 18 2011, 18:19:06 UTC
It makes me happy to hear that your very part was the interaction between Quinn and Rachel because that's what I wanted. Thank you so much for reading :)

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babiiiribeiro July 16 2011, 15:40:44 UTC
Oh God, this is it. After few weeks waiting for this, it is finally up! And it was worth every second of the wait. This chapter was beyond perfect, and it was everything I was hoping for. I was so afraid that Quinn would die in the end, and Rachel would be those kind of people that find love at a very young age, just to have it taken from her, and live a miserable life after. So you can understand my surprise, when not only Quinn got her life back, but Rachel "died". I literally stopped reading for like 15 minutes, trying to get my head somewhere else, thinking like "shit, I cannot believe she killed Rachel!" but then I got back to my notebook, and man, I am so happy I did!

I'm off to read the epilogue now, see you there soon! :)

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lifeawakening July 18 2011, 18:22:39 UTC
Aw I'm so glad that you continued reading after I killed Rachel. Trust me, I had to step away from my computer for a while after I wrote that because it was hard lol. I'm really glad that you liked the ending though. Thank you so much for reading :)

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