fic: deus ex machina

Jul 16, 2011 00:21

Title: Deus Ex Machina [god in the machine]
Chapter: Ten
Author:  lifeawakening 
Words: 7,875
Rating: R (For future scary images, language, and sexual references)
Summary: Rachel Berry always knew that she was a little bit psychic. In fact, Rachel Berry thought she knew just about everything. That is, until a spirit that refused to die entered her life like a train- ( Read more... )

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mjacton July 16 2011, 18:22:43 UTC
Wow, what an ending! I somehow don't really care that you didn't try to explain how it all happened. I really just think it's better this way.

I also think you did a great job of covering all the different possible reactions to something like this happening. Quinn's disbelief in the face of proof and Puck's solidifying of his belief...and Rachel just accepting without question. Plus, everything in between.

Off to the Epilogue!

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lifeawakening July 18 2011, 18:25:40 UTC
I really aimed to show all of the possible reactions to their situation in the story, so I'm really glad that you mentioned that. Thank you so much for reading!

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lifeawakening July 18 2011, 18:27:51 UTC
Oh my goodness lol I absolutely love your reaction to the ending. Thank you so much for sticking with it the whole time and reading :)

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nat365 July 16 2011, 19:24:01 UTC
Ok, so I'm a fan of this ending. I particularly liked the suggestion that Rachel *was* supposed to die, but because of the technology available nowadays she made it back (though I will say that being dead for 7 minutes tends to cause serious brain damage, due to lack of oxygen, so magic/god/something else probably had to be involved for her to not suffer from that ( ... )

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lifeawakening July 18 2011, 18:35:24 UTC
I'm really happy about the fact that you were a fan of this ending despite the loose-end questions about it that you seem to have. Quinn does have difficulties ahead but she definitely had Puck's help with getting a lot of forged documents :) The last line took me a few hours to get right, and I'm glad that it had the same impact on you that it did on me. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

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the_lennox_fan July 16 2011, 22:17:17 UTC
Awwwwwwww!!!!!! Sooooooo good!!!! God, I love fluffy endings and the entire fic was just amazing. :))))

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lifeawakening July 18 2011, 18:35:53 UTC
I'm very glad you liked it! Thank you so much for reading :)

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magicmumu July 17 2011, 00:04:25 UTC
YAY!!! I am so totally freaking happy that the story finished! I am so happy that it all worked out. I was expecting for one of them to die. I wasn't expecting for Quinn's soul to have been a part of a curse that would bring her back to life. This is too weird! I wonder whether Rachel had always meant to counteract that curse or if something else interviened and thought that it would be a good idea l;ater on. Anyway, great ending, and I know there's an epi!

Erin

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lifeawakening July 18 2011, 18:36:56 UTC
I'm so glad that you liked the ending! I feel like Rachel was always meant to be the one to counteract the curse. Thank you so much for reading :)

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