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Irrevocably Combined

May 04, 2007 01:49

Title: Irrevocably Combined
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: Wherein Ryan really just needs some time to figure a few things out.
Word Count: 3078
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: Another outtake from the spiritual agony longfic, ahaha. This one came about because I wrote the opening scene and really adored it, ( Read more... )

brendon/ryan, nc-17, we_are_cities

Comments 57

jzbell May 4 2007, 18:46:09 UTC

Have I told you lately that I love you? Just. Never ever stop writing Brendon/Ryan, okay? Okay.

This is exactly the kind of story I love to read (and reread, and reread...). You've really got a knack for handling difficult subjects in a way that doesn't make me uncomfortable reading, and that is seriously quite a feat, because I tend to get squirmy when things get too serious in fics. But you don't make me squirmy (except in the good ways).

I also just adore how you manage to portray such intimacy between the two of them even when they're not having sex. The bathing together, sleeping together... and when they finally do reach that point, it seems so perfect, inevitable because the lead-up was so perfect.

God. So many hearts. <333!

theaerosolkid May 4 2007, 19:24:55 UTC

Like I could stop writing them.

I'm really glad you liked it. I think their dynamic is one of the most interesting, because the two of them had to learn how to communicate, for the simple sake of the album, and I can't help but think that bleeds over into everyday life.

Thanks again!! :D

self_sustaining May 4 2007, 20:33:31 UTC

*tacklehugs*
You. With the. GUH. I love you, Telis. Marry me?
This was sosososo perfect, and I can't pick just one part because, hi, it's all so good.
I love it.

theaerosolkid May 4 2007, 20:46:49 UTC

I'm glad!!!

*hugs*

siren_mage May 4 2007, 21:24:30 UTC

Oh GAH. Can you just. You're my favorite Ryan/Brendon person I think. My FAVORITE because you just get them so right. You don't shy away from the issues that could realistically crop up between the two; you actually address them and you do it so deftly that it's more than just reading fic, it's reading a quality story about two people who feel incredibly real. I love you for what you do with these boys. You're absolutely fabulous and this is spot on and lovely and I loved the relationship with Ryan and Spencer that you conveyed in just that little bit as well.

Awesome job. Awesomeawesomawesome. :D

theaerosolkid May 5 2007, 02:51:07 UTC

Holy shit, thanks. That's a huge compliment. I don't really know what to say, other than thank you so much and I'm really happy you liked it.

pressdbtwnpages May 4 2007, 22:28:03 UTC

I really like this version of a relationship between Ryan and Brendon, that it's not just something that they fell into.

theaerosolkid May 5 2007, 02:51:39 UTC

Hee, thanks!

cyclogenesis May 4 2007, 23:58:10 UTC

This is really great. I love the way you show their relationship, as this really solid thing that works even if Ryan is indecisive about it. The casual intimacy of it is fascinating - showering together, I'm not sure how you sold me on that, but it works within the context of the story, and I admire that you made that happen, it takes skill.

Well done all around, thanks for a good read.

theaerosolkid May 5 2007, 03:12:21 UTC

Thanks :)

More than anything in this fandom, I'm interested by Brendon and Ryan and all the possible explanations for the way they behave, it's always fun for me to just play about with them. I'm glad I sold you on what is admittedly a bit of a weird proposition :)