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Alive Pt 5

Mar 14, 2014 23:34

Title: Alive Pt 5
Author: limnological
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: TaengSic
Description: AU

( Happiness creeps into you so quietly that you don’t notice, but misfortune arrives very abruptly. )

snsd, jessica jung, taengsic, kim taeyeon

Comments 13

ext_475662 March 15 2014, 17:13:22 UTC

GDI.... I've just readdd all the chaps to here and then you made me cry. :(
I kinda /hate/ it because it is TaengSic, they're already angsty and sad and then this...
But you write so beautifully..
my heartstrings...

limnological March 18 2014, 07:28:50 UTC

<3 I am really surprised I made you ( and others! ) cry! Haha, keep hating it... until you read the last part! Thank you, love.

kaorujin March 15 2014, 17:55:42 UTC

Hi hi. I loved how you incorporated all their jokes and references from before in this chapter. Jessica had a beautiful end :'( They'll meet again and greet each other with a /hell/o eventually.

limnological March 18 2014, 07:27:31 UTC

Thank I tried hard young padawan. LMAO /HELL/O. You're such a genius <3

sparksfly7 March 15 2014, 17:57:16 UTC

I saw this coming, but it still hurts :'( I suppose it's a good thing that Taeyeon was right there with Jessica at the end, but god, it must have been so painful for her. But then again, it's going to be painful no matter what, right?

Nice job incorporating all the references from before, by the way.

limnological March 18 2014, 07:28:02 UTC

It's okay, we all saw it coming. I saw it coming! Always painful. Death is a difficult thing.

theagonyofblank March 16 2014, 08:56:23 UTC

I think we all saw that coming, but wow. I just read all five chapters in one go and I love the way you've developed their relationship: from strangers to acquaintances and then finally to friends (more than friends) until the inevitable end. I actually teared up at the last two scenes. Also, the inclusion of Sooyoung was really great and offered a nice relief in the later chapters when things started going downhill for Jessica.

There's a lot about this fic I really enjoyed and I can't remember all of them, but they definitely include Taeyeon interacting with the kids (and I love how she just went in there for some peach juice but got sucked into volunteering - by her own will, of course, but still!), and Jessica getting "rejected" by Kyungsan (smart move there Kyungsan; I SEE WHAT YOU'RE DOING). I'm looking forward to your final chapter!

(Also, thanks for making me intrigued about Attack on Titan, which my friend has told me to watch countless times over...)

limnological March 18 2014, 07:31:38 UTC

Well, thank you! I am surprised to see a comment from you. (I read your very lengthy space fic and was impressed with how you handled such an abstract concept) I am very surprised I was able to tug on so many heartstrings! I am not that confidence when it comes to angst, haha. Thank you for your lovely words and picking some things out that you enjoyed. :) I hope the last chapter wraps it up nicely for everyone.

P.S. Please do watch Attack on Titan. It is an amazing and intriguing Anime. And when you do, come back and let's chat, haha.

theagonyofblank March 18 2014, 13:32:55 UTC

Oh, I generally try to leave comments on works I've read and liked, though I'm sure I've forgotten to comment on some here and there. The exceptions are for age-old fics; I usually just bookmark those and move on. (Thanks, I think, haha!) Well, you do angst very well, so don't fret!

PS: I will probably hold you to that! Though it might take me a few months to watch it, haha.

parachuterawr March 16 2014, 22:42:46 UTC

Well unlike everyone else... I DIDNT SEE IT COMING. AT ALL.

But....yeah. Jessica had a good ending, at least Taeyeon was there with her. She didn't really go through it alone.

Sorry it took me a few days to respond. I was never good at time managing and... death. (Heh, okay I was lazy but still)

I really like this fic. I hope your next one will be a happy Taengsic! :)

limnological March 18 2014, 07:34:24 UTC

Haha, did you think I was going to bust a miracle? Was it my fluff track record that lead you on? :') It's okay. I am always thankful for comments, small or big, late or early. Don't hold your breath on a happy TaengSic, haha... Is that mean? I'll just make it up with more JeTi and YoonYul, haha.