nothing but blue skies

Apr 11, 2010 03:37

nothing but blue skies
yunho/changmin
pg-13
when being over is better than being under.

am i bright enough to shine in your spaces? )

p: yunho/changmin

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blurmeese April 11 2010, 07:52:54 UTC
OH MY GOD WHAT IS THIS BRILLIANCE ;___; I love, love how simply and how smoothly this reads, like it isn't much of a fic but more of a retelling of something, like somehow this is actually a transcription of someone telling an old story ;_; and the whole concept, Yuxi gdi I love your storylines so hard, this one being no different. The new take on a dystopia, oh ♥

And the ending. Oh. Open ended in a way that perhaps, Yunho had been wrong and this is how heaven is like for Changmin, sunshine and fields and sky and perhaps Yunho had been right and this is how the Upperground looks like. ♥ thank you for making my afternoon pretty amazing bb

Study hard like a hard thing bb and kill those exams!

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blurmeese April 11 2010, 07:54:04 UTC
...for the first time in my life, did I actually get first comment? o-o-omg heaven is smiling on me today :DDDDDD

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loveclouds April 11 2010, 07:57:34 UTC
..................you are very incredibly fast idek omg joey i JUST posted this :x

:'( I DIDN'T KNOW IF THIS COUNTED AS DYSTOPIA. ;_____________;

and yeah, i wanted the ending to lead back to the beginning so there's closure for changmin but idk, even i don't know what i meant at the end. -_- i'm glad you liked it though :') AND WHY IS IT THE AFTERNOON FOR YOU IT'S 4AM OVER HERE ;A;

♥ :') :3

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oldwillow_brook April 11 2010, 08:05:16 UTC
MOLE PEOPLE.

BRB.

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loveclouds April 11 2010, 08:05:53 UTC
LOL MUST YOU CALL THEM THAT

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oldwillow_brook April 11 2010, 08:27:14 UTC
TELL ME YOU DONT LAUGH AT IT THOUGH. They live underground! THEY MUST BE.

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oldwillow_brook April 11 2010, 08:26:26 UTC
WHAT THE HELL YUXI. THIS IS GENIUS. WOW. I'm like AMAZED AT IT ALL. I JUST. THAT WAS SO SHORT BUT SO FANTASTIC ( ... )

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yuukihitohira April 11 2010, 08:11:30 UTC
SOBBING, AND I WAS ABOUT TO GO TO BED AT 4AM OURSELF :(

This was wonderful and I love how you come up with all these different AUs and worlds that are just so different from each other and so amazing<333333

the bittersweet ending was just<333

anddd I might come back to comment more when I'm more awake ;_;

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loveclouds April 11 2010, 08:12:36 UTC
HOMFG OURSELF IT'S SO FUCKING LATE I'M SO TIRED ;A; BUT...EXAMS!!!!

;_______; it's okay, go to bed. have good dreams, okay? ilu :3 ♥

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apocryphalic April 11 2010, 08:28:07 UTC
I honestly don’t know how you never realized that I love aus like this : l I love, love, love dystopian worlds or even just worlds in which things are just slightly off. But since you don’t know, let me tell you why then : l I love fics like this because you can picture the world in your mind as you’re reading the fic, I can see the pipes and I can see the dirt and the smooth metal ceiling that serves as their sky. And fuck, I love fics like this T___T it’s like the love child of 1984 with a government that tells you what to do and you have to do it and The Giver where a character is trying to break free of the life he’s given because he knows what’s out there and how much more there is. Fuck, did I mention I love this fic yet? &Hearts;

He liked Yunho, still likes him, and whenever their mothers were too busy to pay attention, they always snuck out to play around between the mazes of pipes and metals in the Underground.I picture the matrix for some reason, lol. But god, I love the sci-fi feel to this fic, how they live underground in ( ... )

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apocryphalic April 11 2010, 08:30:20 UTC
because it didn't work : l

♥ ♥

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loveclouds April 11 2010, 08:38:38 UTC
;_; i seriously love you. and okay fine, I KNEW YOU LOVED WORLDS LIKE THIS SINCE WE TALK LIKE 24/7 so just chalk it up to momentary brainfart, okay? ;_; i didn't think you would like this THAT MUCH LOLOLOLOL you're so adorb i don't know what to do with you, libby. ;____ ( ... )

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apocryphalic April 11 2010, 08:43:40 UTC
ugh, you are just sgfkjsbfjhsh i tell you i love things and clearly it doesn't get through to you D: does this mean on your master f-list, this fic with get an ♥ now because i love it so much? T___T it better

i didn't like the giver either D: god, i had to read that book two times for two different classes. all those papers and shit, man, i hate it like i hate romeo and juliet with all its hidden symbolism and roses.

sleeping : l they're not sleeping like sleeping beauty, they won't wake. they're like zebra and that girl and that dude that i can't spell the name of. they do not have shadows now DD:

i got your pun, imagine my face. i'm sure you can see i am a) face-palming and b) unimpressed. very unimpressed.

DDDD: WELL YOU GET MY ANALOGY RIGHT...RIGHT?!

i can't swim very well so i drown easily : lll who is to say i haven't already drowned T____T oh rp, it's our rp anniversary soon ♥ ♥

i love you more : l i dare you to argue with me on that.

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latenightchai April 11 2010, 08:51:47 UTC
omg, this was amazing ♥

i absolutely love the idea of Underground/Upperground and the whole set-up of this au. post-apocalyptic fiction is one of my favorite genres and at first it seemed like just a play on that, but the more the story unfolded the more depth and complexity revealed itself. i felt like we were only getting a small glimpse into a much larger story, but at the same time i was perfectly content with what i got. and, asljaj;kgaj i'm currently writing an original story that's actually got some similar themes to this so i'm all about construction these days, and so i'm quite in awe of the way you worked it

but that aside, i loved the homin in this, the way their relationship just kind of exists, and there just seemed to be something about them that was so... grounded (excuse the pun, lol). and even before the whole 'perfect last day' i could totally see changmin slowly letting yunho go, and when he really did, oh. ;; when yunho 'talked' to changmin in his head it was just so wonderfully sad. the whole end was just such ( ... )

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loveclouds April 11 2010, 08:54:59 UTC
\:D/

lol wow, that's such a huge compliment :x thanks so much! i wish you the best of luck because i won't lie, i actually hate constructing au worlds where it's au enough to need WORLD CONSTRUCTION D: so i'm surprised at myself for getting through this. it was written from 1-4am very sloppily so i'm actually quite relieved it wasn't incoherent and terrible D: -_-

:) i love homin so much omfg ;____; ♥ i just want to hot glue gun them together for eternity and then i'd be happy forever and ;____;

♥ :3

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