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apocryphalic April 25 2015, 18:49:49 UTC
you wrote fic! you wrote fic after years and it's not only exo fic, it's sukai. giiiiiiiiiiiiiiiirl.

omg before i say anything, i need to say YUNHO. MY YUNHO. AND MY HOMIN. I SEE IT. YOU CAN TAKE THE GIRL OUT OF THE PAIRING BUT YOU CAN'T TAKE THE PAIRING OUT OF THE GIRL.

ahem, anyway. junmyeon is legit the nicest kid. i know i said this a million times and i know i have been teasing you with how he's such a good kid but that he's a bit too lame and pc for me, but ugh, he really is such a good kid and it shines through in this fic. the very handful of paragraphs, i was just thinking to myself how good a kid this fellow is and how i want him to get what he deserves, not just want he wants because lord knows a kid like him wouldn't ever even think of wanting something selfish. he might think of it from time to time but it wouldn't ever be something he wishes for himself. he's a sweetie and if anything, this fic has made me fall in love with him as a character and a person. kudos to you for nailing his character ( ... )

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loveclouds April 26 2015, 03:02:55 UTC
GODDAMMIT YIXING DON'T LOOK AT ME LIKE THAT

I

AUUUGHHH
ARGH

AHHHH

would you accept gen yixing fic?! i mean he's just so WONDERFUL and he gets along with everyone so i don't think i can ever just pick a ship...THOUGH HUNLAY IS GETTING UP THERE I HAVE TO ADMIT. WHY DID YOU USE THAT GIF AND TOTALLY SMACK ME IN THE FACE WITH YIXING FEELS WHAT HAVE YOU DONE

thank you for reading this and giving me your honest feedback ;3; it was meandering for a lot i know but as you can see i stuffed in everything i wanted: sukai, making out, and yunho, because yunho. HAHAHAHA T____T my feelings are scattered everywhere, it's so messy.

I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU ♥

let's scream at our otps a lot when you come for tokyo dome :D

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noteholding April 26 2015, 01:13:06 UTC
Ugly crying like suho at you finally writing and sukai!!!! /rolls around with giddy feelings

I'm so !!! at your suho throughout this fic, so selfless, so wonderful, so hesitant in admitting what he wants from kai?????? And kai, oh kai, sighs heavily at these two.

If I had those anime pics where the girls bite their handkerchief in frustration, I would post it!! Because that was me reading the first part. Sehun being so patient and not intervening even though he really wants to.

“sometimes the only thing to say is nothing, because that’s what’s best for everyone.”
After reading this line, I was preparing my kokoro for an unhappy ending u_____u

;;;;;;;;;;;; his wish for exo and his priorities.

During the misunderstanding, I was just facepalming :|
noooooo he cried ;~~~~~~~~~~;

lmao of course Jongin asked Yunho for advice! hehe I see homin as well ♡♡♡
“you’re actually the first one who’s asked me that since you’ve all debuted.”god, this sentence /wibbles ( ... )

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loveclouds April 26 2015, 03:09:06 UTC
I AM CRYING AT YOU BECAUSE LITERALLY YOU WERE THE ONE WHO MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH THEM AS HARD AS I DID ;A; ;A; ;A; it was like "oh i'm thinking about joining exo fandom" and you were like "LOL SENDS ALL THE SUKAI FEELS" and i just drowned. you are so good to me :')

♥ thank you so much for reading all of this and being so kind the whole time! i was really worried tbh, i think it's the first thing ive written for kpop in something like 4.5 years? crazy shit. i'm just glad you enjoyed :D and you totally saw through my exact list of thoughts when i was writing this lmfao: 1) gush about suho 2) shove yunho in there somewhere 3) making out 4) fluff and rainbows. A LOT OF THOUGHT WENT INTO THIS YOU SEE

i'm going to roll around in your comment while thinking about some premise for sukai porn HA HA HA :D ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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creedee April 26 2015, 02:58:55 UTC

Awww... jongin so cuteeeeeee

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loveclouds April 26 2015, 15:52:18 UTC
he really is!! thanks for reading :)

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haixiao April 26 2015, 05:49:38 UTC
sorry i accidentally posted my comment as a reply e____e
anyway

I LOVED THIS OMFG
MY HEART ACHES BUT IN A GOOD WAY
i'm so emotional after reading this gdi

i just love how you wrote suho here ;____; such perfect characterization honestly
and when they finally talked it out and got together i just gbfdjgbldjgs

thank you.....so much.....for writing this and sharing this

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loveclouds April 26 2015, 15:53:21 UTC
eheheheheheHEHEHE i'm so glad you enjoyed this!! and it means a lot that you felt my characterization was good; i was so nervous about that! PRECIOUS BB SUHO IS EVERYTHINNNNGGG ♥

thank you for reading! :D

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atheend April 26 2015, 18:12:39 UTC
Can I hug this fic?!!!! Can I hug Jongin and Yunho scene?!!!! This was so good!!!!!! God, I'm such a sucker for leader/maknae couples (or the oldest/youngest). Mem-ing this for eternity!!!

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loveclouds April 27 2015, 14:08:11 UTC
ehehehe i'm so glad you enjoyed yunho's cameo! i wasn't gonna but i definitely was because perfect leader is perfect :3 thanks for reading!

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