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Bet Me; Chapter 8; An Introduction to Soul Gazing

Apr 19, 2012 00:27

Massive thanks to my beta readers Bex, and Lauren3210. Thank you to everyone who is reading this. Thanks for every one who takes the time to comment here and on FF. I have to say I'm super crazy pumped for the next episode of TVD.

( Bet Me; Chapter 8; Intro to Soul Gazing )

damon and elena, bet me, fan fiction

Comments 44

sauriemilia April 18 2012, 14:55:49 UTC

OMG I wanted to hop into that shower with him!!! Your chapters are always worth the wait. The gazing into each others eyes was marvelous and Katherine at the end? Talk about a cliffie!
Excellent Chapter Michelle!

:) jaimy818 April 18 2012, 15:00:57 UTC

Aaawh, poor sexually frustrated Damon. I'd shower with him! I volunteer..! Great chappie, you better update soon, cause cliffhangers... Grrrrrr..! ;)

rosesforever94 April 18 2012, 15:05:35 UTC

So much tension in this chapter! I like it ;)

Poor Damon, sexually frustrated and no one to help him out, lol.

I loved the scene where they had to stare into each others eyes. You wrote the tension between them really well, I loved it.

I wonder what Kat's doing there.

Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! :D

xoxo

lokya2046 April 18 2012, 15:07:28 UTC

I think 99.9% of the readers were concerned about Damon, not just some. LOL.

Such an intense chapter, I don't know how Elena managed to refused to hop into the shower with Damon.

Why Von Gruber give them special treatment, does he smell something filthy here? And why Katherine is there.

And I just confirmed that your DE normally have already slept together by chapter 8! But for this one which filled with enormous sexual tension, they are still hanging on without give in their desire yet.

Bravo to them.

But wondering how they can survive the second night - though I know the day still young...

Thanks for updating tonight. I am a happy reader now! :)

mridul777 April 18 2012, 15:18:09 UTC

Damon and his poor poor member... oh how I feel sad for both of them... I ...for once thought that she might actually "help" him out...

Anywho... Katherine?? And she doesn't remember them? I bet she could be as huge a help, as much of a nuisance she was back then.. LOL

But I wish both of them could get out of their...umm.. for a lack of a better word... F**CK-STRATED states [not frustrated... ;) ] soon enough and give "us" happiness... Hee :)