Bet Me; Chapter 8; An Introduction to Soul Gazing

Apr 19, 2012 00:27



Massive thanks to my beta readers Bex, and Lauren3210. Thank you to everyone who is reading this. Thanks for every one who takes the time to comment here and on FF. I have to say I'm super crazy pumped for the next episode of TVD.

Bet Me; Chapter 8; Intro to Soul Gazing )

damon and elena, bet me, fan fiction

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themadkatter13 April 18 2012, 22:03:38 UTC
O.O My goodness, that was still a steamy chapter. It's tense how Klaus feels on to them and now Katherine? Oh my!

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laughingsmyfav April 18 2012, 23:44:05 UTC
so glad you updated. i was going insane a little with the lack of updates from other stories I've been reading so when i saw this i was like yay!!!!! Great great chappie loved delenas tension. I wonder what katherine is doing there and why she is there......hmmmmm, UPDATE SOOON (:

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c1ashcityrocker April 19 2012, 00:03:16 UTC
lol, loved your note at the end concerning Damon's member. lmao. cracked me up.

i bet that soul-gazing thing was awkward as ass for damon and elena. for a couple who are actually together, and have been truly intimate... ok... still a little weird, but ok. but for these two, with sexual tension thick enough to cut? lol though... damon does have beautiful eyes... if she doesn't wanna gaze... can I?

sorry about the late review, i read it thru with several interruptions and distractions at work. needed another read thru at home to catch everything. elena's actions in the bathroom were pretty predictable, but i was glad to see she at least admitted to being attracted to him. (but then, who wouldn't be... honestly) i must admit though she has some pretty powerful willpower to turn down damon's "shower" suggestion... especially all shirtless .. and boxers... and... mmm... lol she must really want her story =P

curious about kat... especially with your note at the end too.. hmm..

this update came as a total surprise... so thanks =D

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knots_in_myhair April 19 2012, 01:02:24 UTC
Well shes got more restraint than me. I woulda jumped in the shower before he even asked. Haha. I love this story. Ive probably said this before but you write their relationship so perfectly. You balance their banter and sexual tension so well. I cant wait to read more. :)

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titeve79 April 19 2012, 01:17:18 UTC
OMG That was excellent. I loved it!

Poor Damon, all sexually frustrated. And poor Elena too, it's obvious she wants him.

I'm really intrigued by Katherine...

Very good job. It was a hot an sexy chapter.

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