Bet Me; Chapter 8; An Introduction to Soul Gazing

Apr 19, 2012 00:27



Massive thanks to my beta readers Bex, and Lauren3210. Thank you to everyone who is reading this. Thanks for every one who takes the time to comment here and on FF. I have to say I'm super crazy pumped for the next episode of TVD.

Bet Me; Chapter 8; Intro to Soul Gazing )

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dark_spn_angel April 18 2012, 18:17:44 UTC
The sexual tension is going to lead Delena to give in sooner than they expected.

I wonder what Damon and Elena are going to write in those notebooks....maybe something truthful?

Whoa for the Katherine twist....there is no way she'd forget Damon willingly so something's up with her.

Awesome job!
Update soon!!

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scarlett2112 April 18 2012, 18:41:45 UTC
I don't know where she found the willpower to not get into that shower with him. They are both so wound up here. Something is going to snap that tether! The soul gazing exercise was just electric. Neither of them are any good at masquerading their feelings. I think they both know there is "something there" but neither one wants to let themselves go there! I am anxious for what Von Gruber has in mind for their private session. It should be interesting.
Why the heck is Katherine there & what game is she playing?
Does she really not know them or is it a facade?
They didn't need the steam of the shower. They generate enough heat without any assistance. Brilliant chapter as always Michelle. I love the mystery of this too. I think Von Gruber is alot more cunning, evil than they can begin to imagine at this point in the story. They meed to watch their backs.
I'm anxious to watch DE collect, process the clues & decimate Klaus's evil machinations...

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hawaibabe April 18 2012, 18:54:25 UTC
Sooo....Should I be worried that Katherine doesn't seem to have her memory? Does that mean Elena and Damon are gonna lose theirs too?!! Haha

I really liked this chapter...Not too much overt sexual tension, but lots of sweet moments with underlying tension! I can't wait to read more!

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thess2002 April 18 2012, 21:19:21 UTC
Wow, amazing chapter, again! you are one great writer my dear! I am really looking forward to seeing what they will choose to write about for this exercise.

But I really want you to take it easy and don't exhaust yourself. Seems like you are pushing yourself a bit hard.

Take good care of yourself!

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dunedesert April 18 2012, 21:38:32 UTC
i simply adore this story. i wish i had such a talent to write something remotely good.
excellent story, amazing chapter.
please, update soon. :)

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