Bet Me; Chapter 3; The Story. It's All For The Story.

Mar 13, 2012 22:54



A/N: Day 4. I was thoroughly entertained reading your responses to the last chapter. I think I felt better reading them this time round, LOL.  I've had some interesting thoughts and reflections as I've been re-reading this story. There have been moments I've thought about changing, but since not everyone is re-reading, I decided not to do that. We ( Read more... )

damon and elena, bet me, fan fiction

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dunedesert March 13 2012, 22:20:05 UTC
oh my... though reading it for a second time (considering i was a devoted fan of this story on ff lol), it's still steamy and interesting.
thank you.

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verdi_p March 14 2012, 08:45:03 UTC
What happened to Damon is what I love to call divine punishment. You've been a jerk and you're punished.
Dalaric friendship makes me melt, plus he's the only one who Damon listen.
Kick-boxing Elena! Yay! I love see Damon drooling over her :) and I'm glad she told him exectly who he is at the restaurant. He was an hypocritical dick.
The bet will be definitely interesting :)
Waiting for the next dear.
You're always amazing!

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siberia21 March 14 2012, 13:51:07 UTC
Oh my, best lesson ever! Everybody on Elena´s side and he doesn´t have any option but beg! I LOVE Melody. And Mason - brilliant! Rick knows nothing about women - he thinks her desire to have her story back makes her let go of the past? No way. At least Damon has an idea still I think he´s now pretty satisfied how it went - too early - she won´t make it easier for him. OK, everything you throw on him - he deserves. Loved Elena, her thoughts and her self-control, glad she told him exactly her opinion about getting her kicked of the story. I´m in love with every word of this chapter so maybe just - "leave this snake to his dinner" - hilarious! It may sound weird but I´m looking forward to read the story again when it´s completed - because it will be much more pleasure not having to stop (I do it all the time). Thank you Michelle!!!

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sailor_lu March 14 2012, 16:35:20 UTC
I'm veeeeeeery curious about what the bet would be and who will win ))) Maybe it'll include going to the class reunion together ;)
But before it we'll have a great time reading about their bonding :D

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lokya2046 March 15 2012, 00:57:14 UTC
Here comes the bet.

And a small taste of small town for Damon.

I love that we can see the emotional ans sexual tension between the two. And how much that night and that kiss are still very much in their mind.

And yes, Damon still hasn't changed his opinion on Elena, only Elena and we knows how much he has crushed her heart that night. Poor Elena.

They need to make up about this soon.

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