RE: Splinter
anonymous
October 3 2002, 02:07:49 UTC
oh, my, oh, my, my poor JC - fix him, fix him!!! And AJ, my AJ, , this just isn't right. Lucy, I love you but why, oh, why do you keep abusing the Letterboys? But atleast you gave us ranting, angry Kevin to make up for it ... and oh, so helpful, blond Nick.
I don't really "keep" doing it, I don't think. It's only been in these stories that I've been mean to them. And it'll be over soon, only one more story to go.
Oh my, you do know how to position and twist that knife, don't you? Completely out-of-control AJ isn't a pretty animal, and I was really feeling for JC even before he was thrown out of the hotel room - from there it all spiraled into a big ball of badness. I did love helpful!Nick and Kevin being all take-charge - starting this I hadn't realized we were already at the broken hand/broken door stage, so that surprised me a tad.
Honestly, I know I probably repeat myself something terrible, but you're so talented and your writing always touches me - love the funny stuff, but this darker, more intense story has grabbed my heartstrings and won't let go. I'm along for the ride, although I admit to wincing and covering my eyes now and again.
No, he isn't pretty at all, and that's why I've always sort of avoided writing pre-rehab AJ. Because, you know, "bottom" isn't the same for everyone, and it isn't always a complete train wreck, but sometimes. . .
*sigh* I hope it wasn't too abrupt. I'll try to wrap things up soon.
Reaching this point wasn't too abrupt, but I'm thinking either I missed clues to approximate dates, or you cleverly didn't give us any hints.
This whole series has been amazing, and while it's not a fluffy happy fic, I'm forever reminded of your storytelling abilities and amazing characterization. This series does ring true at heart - thought it's not the way it 'really' happened, it sure *feels* real.
This is. Wow. You're writing is so evocative, and this whole storyline has just sucked me right in. It all seemed mostly innocent at first, and now. It's all crumbling down around AJ and JC and, I just. I know they need help, and I know how the real life version of the story went, but man, you have me shaking in my chair, and.
I don't know if they can be fixed entirely, but I'm aching for it, and that means this story has gripped me utterly.
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So sweet, so painful. I just love this.....
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I swear this one had me near tears.
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Honestly, I know I probably repeat myself something terrible, but you're so talented and your writing always touches me - love the funny stuff, but this darker, more intense story has grabbed my heartstrings and won't let go. I'm along for the ride, although I admit to wincing and covering my eyes now and again.
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*sigh* I hope it wasn't too abrupt. I'll try to wrap things up soon.
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This whole series has been amazing, and while it's not a fluffy happy fic, I'm forever reminded of your storytelling abilities and amazing characterization. This series does ring true at heart - thought it's not the way it 'really' happened, it sure *feels* real.
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I don't know if they can be fixed entirely, but I'm aching for it, and that means this story has gripped me utterly.
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