Comments | lukesaysno: Fic: Lack of Understanding

lukesaysno

Fic: Lack of Understanding

May 22, 2005 17:35

18-22 May 2005
Title: Lack of Understanding
Fandom/Pairing: LOST, Jack.Kate
Warnings/Rating: none, pg
Summary: For foxxcub's Jack/Sawyer ficathon. mysticxf asked for Jack/Kate, Any timeline, Handcuffs and Frogs, with no Bad Sex, Seeds or Counting. Hope I didn't let her down. I seriously thought this was due tomorrow.

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( The way things have been going lately his back is the first thing he should be protecting... )

fic, lost

Comments 4

halfdutch May 22 2005, 19:50:12 UTC

Wow, I can't believe you found a way to incorporate frogs! That was a toughie and you did a really nice job with it. ;-D

lukesaysno May 22 2005, 20:17:27 UTC

it was def. a tougie. the only other way would have been something drrty. Thanks

eponine119 May 22 2005, 21:58:20 UTC

This was great! I think you really captured the uncertainty in Jack and Kate's relationship, which isn't that easy to do. It's a really short story when you look at it, but reading it, it seems to expand into something bigger. Which I guess is just babble for the fact that you're concise and know exactly what details to include. Nice job.

mysticxf May 24 2005, 18:40:59 UTC

Oooo, I am impressed. I was expecting a really wacky story and you smacked me in the face with this beauty! Jack and Kate's relationship is so complicated inside their heads and yet so simple on the surface it hurts to see them still holding up the walls. Loved how you got the handcuffs (Kate's got these fun reminders of her previous situation worn like accessories on people she sees everyday) and the frog in there!! I ditto what eponine119 says -- no filler, just good storytelling! Thanks.