Comments | lyrical_liessss: LJ Idol Week 17- The Caged Bird

lyrical_liessss

Mar 08, 2010 00:01

Up the stairs. Running, running, running. No way out. She sees nothing but doors, all closed, keys no where to be found ( Read more... )

Comments 13

plastrickland23 March 8 2010, 05:41:54 UTC

Great job! I like the description of the sky. P.

kurisitaru March 8 2010, 07:58:54 UTC

Very lovely... also the reason if I had a direction to choose, I'd run DOWN the stairs.

Thrilling, and chilling. This is fantastic.

baxaphobia March 8 2010, 10:48:38 UTC

Nicely done. Good descriptions.

shadowwolf13 March 8 2010, 21:31:35 UTC

Reminds me of many of my nightmares.

lawchicky March 9 2010, 16:15:54 UTC

Heh, I have those kinds of nightmares too.