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May 02, 2005 20:19

a puff of smoke escapes from her lips ( Read more... )

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crisc13 May 4 2005, 20:54:35 UTC
michele my love, your poem has me (possibly needlessly) concerned. its very well written... can you explain to me what it means so that i dont have to panic that my michele is unhappy?

i love you.

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maki_poet May 5 2005, 02:17:49 UTC
cristina my love, you have nothing to worry about. i was being rather descriptive in my head with everything i saw and then a saw a girl smoking a cigeratte and the first line formed in my head and the rest came after. so it really doesn't mean anything. miss you and after my finals are over i'm calling you. (friday they end)

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anonymous May 9 2005, 23:09:36 UTC
interesting ending....makes you wonder. excellent poem!

-dean

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