Comments | mara_joy: H50 Fic: Of Relativity, the Beach, and Confusing SEALs 1/1

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H50 Fic: Of Relativity, the Beach, and Confusing SEALs 1/1

Nov 14, 2011 03:40

Title: Of Relativity, the Beach, and Confusing SEALs
Author:mara_joy
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own the pretty. I just play with them.
Warnings: Uhh…no plot whatsoever. Just fluff. Oh, and it's unbeta'd, so all mistakes are mine. Please let me know if words are missing! Does anybody know where I can get a beta?
Spoilers: None really. ( Read more... )

hawaii five-0, fluff-fic, fic, rating:pg-13, steve/danny

Comments 31

simplyn2deep November 14 2011, 09:50:48 UTC

this is really good. it flowed in and out like the waves

mara_joy November 14 2011, 20:45:33 UTC

Thank you! =)

neek_love November 14 2011, 09:50:51 UTC

I love this! So lovely and...gentle, is the word that comes to mind. A nice contrast to the grab-and-screw fic out there :)

(Would you please let me know if you find a beta, I'm looking for one for H50 too!)

mara_joy November 14 2011, 20:46:05 UTC

Thanks so much!

gyri November 14 2011, 12:45:53 UTC

Beautiful!

mara_joy November 14 2011, 20:46:29 UTC

Thank you!! =)

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mara_joy November 14 2011, 20:47:42 UTC

Aww...thank you! I do love the rants and that face that Steve always seems to plaster on when Danny goes off.

kitmerlot1213 November 14 2011, 13:11:44 UTC

This was damn sweet!

And I like that Danny realizes how Steve's connection to the ocean is one of the things that keeps him grounded.

Lovely work on this :)

mara_joy November 14 2011, 20:49:00 UTC

There's just something about the ocean that just makes everything ok. Thank you for reading!