Little Women Fic: Tempo and Rhythm, Pt 2/3 (Jo/Laurie) (Rated NC-17)

[mariagoner]

It took me forever and a day to update this, thanks to school, work and a very persnickety sex scene that truly tested the sturdiness of Laurie's piano... but finally, I'm done with the second part of Tempo and Rhythm. Potix, I hope you don't mind waiting so long for this bit! And Elizabeth, thank you for helping me out with this piece as always!

Comments

[mariagoner]

Ah, I had no idea that you were reading this stuff! It's such a... well, departure from my previous work. I mean, how much more different can you get from Final Fantasy XII than to go to Little Women as a source, really? ;) But I'm giddy to know you're reading this fic nonetheless. And if you want to see more of the source material...

::cough here's a link to the movie cough::

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gmefP8jWX1g

And oh, I miss you too! How are you? Are you still in school or working or in the stages of 'funemployment'? I'm actually online with AIM right now, if you're there! I'm pretty erratic on signing up and tend to do so only on weekends anyway... but it would be good to catch up with you. ♥

[potix]

only one word:great!
and this sentence "Jo did not blanch but she did look at him with a fair amount of shock, as though he had just interrupted her by slapping her across the face with a wet fish. "We've been married for four years, Teddy. I think I'm well aware of your equipment already!"-simply beautiful...only Jo could be so witty during a very hot encounter...!!!

[mariagoner]

Eeee, I'm so happy you enjoy your fic! This was written specifically for you so I'm really, really thrilled that you like this bit. ♥

And you know Jo and Laurie... you can't shut them up unless you gag them. (Which... hmm, fascinating idea I should probably keep in reserve presently. :P) They've got snappy banter and scorching hot sex! What more could you want, truly?

[onyxzeconqueror]

OH

MY

HEAVENS

that was unbelievably hot. i cannot tell you how much i have wanted to read a fic that has actually gone to this intimate item of laurie's and maria, seriously everything is just *fans self* this smut chapter has fulfilled all of my fantasies for this pairing

you have made my day

[mariagoner]

This reply and your icon makes me feel all warm and fuzzy

[sofia666]

:D It's always hard to decide who's POV I like better, when I'm reading your fics. I do love Teddy's... expressiveness, though. and kinky Jo&Laurie sex against a piano (I love music and pianos terribly)- very hot! and I loved it. great writing.

[mariagoner]

Ah, I'm sorry for answering this so late, darling! Life just got in the way and for the last two weeks, I've been alternately working on and being strangled by the most important presentation of my professional career so far. ::gulp:: Sorry for getting back to you so many weeks later!

And oh, hearing from you always makes me happy. ♥ Truthfully, I'm not sure whether i like writing Jo or Laurie's POV more, since they're both absolutely so much damn fun to write. Although now I guess I need to write hot, kinky Jo/Laurie sex from Jo's POV, since it's all been on Laurie's side so far. I guess now I got me a new summer project! XD

[bantam_shine]

I left a review of the first chapter on ff.net, but wanted to read the uncut version of this chapter on here. I feel as though I need a cold shower now. Haha. Great scene, combining their emotional intimacy with their physical intimacy. Loved it!

[mariagoner]

I friended you so you can keep reading this chapter now that I'm locking it. ;) The last chapter for this mini-series is up as well, in case you'd like to finish the piece. And thank you so much for reviewing!

And Jo/Laurie are love just because both the sexual and emotional chemistry is there. These two just get each other in every way possible. That's why I ship them so desperately. ♥