Sherlock fic: The Problem with Personal Blogs, Part 13

[mariole]

Title: The Problem with Personal Blogs, Part 13/21
Characters: Holmes, Watson, Lestrade, the BBC gang (Molly, Sarah, Donovan, Anderson)
Rating: PG to Strong Adult - this part NC-17
Warnings: Excessive estrogen, dubcon
Summary: Sherlock finds himself the recipient of unwanted attention, thanks to the Internet.
Notes: Thank you winterstorrm for the beta and

Comments

[bugeyedmonster]

Go Molly!

[mariole]

I don't think she can be stopped. Cheers!

[fantasy_fan]

Oh, this is absolutely delightful! I liked the first Sherlock story you wrote, but since I hadn’t seen the show it didn’t have as much of an impact - I didn’t really know what was going on. Now that I have actually watched the BBC Sherlock, I can appreciate the stories you’re writing even more, and this one is just terrific. And of course, the fact that the BBC incarnation of Sherlock in the person of Benedict Cumberbatch is absolutely edible might have a wee bit to do with it, perhaps? This is going to be a sort of all purpose review, since I’ve devoured this in one go and not written anything for the other entries

[mariole]

Fantasy Fan! It's so great to see you again! And you come bearing such a wonderful gift in this amazing, detailed comment. Thank you so much! Have a matched set of all your favorite characters

[fantasy_fan]

Well, you know I do love to speculate, and since I get it wrong most of the time, I have learned to cheerfully await what the author has planned. It's always better than what I come up with anyway, so I have no doubts that I will greatly enjoy your ending - past experience has proven your prowess.

Benedict does have interesting features, doesn't he? The cheekbones are quite prominent, and he has that brooding-eye expression down very well. As you say, not a conventional pretty-boy, but well worth looking at, and so charasmatically played. The hair is a big bonus for me.

Cheers!

[mariole]

I don't even bother to speculate; when a story has me, I'm happy to ride along with no critical thought whatsoever. I guess I'm a born fan. :)

Benedict's features are so interesting. I can't say handsome. I can say, completely captivating. But it's the whole personality; he comes through, and it's wonderful to watch. Cheers!

[i_sudoku]

Wow, that was unexpected turn of events, Sherlock got lucky even though he didn't want to but John didn't. At least, as Sarah said, their dinner date went well.

I'm addicted to your fic now so I don't know what I will do when you have finished posting this story :)

[mariole]

Yay! I'm so glad you're finding this fun. We'll get to John in the next bit.

The story will wrap up, but I hope satisfactorily. Perhaps I'll have another Sherlock idea. Thanks so much for all your feedback on this one. Cheers!

[thexphial]

This is very well written, but you might want to warn for non-con. I mean, it's still non-con even when it's a woman doing it to a man.

[dayja]

heh, i was just about to point this out. Brilliant story, but still non-con. Even if this Sherlock seems unlikely to make the connection himself, he did say no and she did keep going...all things considered I can't help but wonder if he wouldn't find the experience more traumatic than enjoyable in the end; Sherlock isn't the type to like losing control. I'm almost tempted to wonder if Molly won't turn out to be the mystery blogger except I can't see how she could have started it (though it would be an awesome and unexpected twist...). Anyway...to the author...good job so far. I don't usually even read anything remotely Sherlock/Molly, and I'm enjoying this.

[mariole]

Thank you so much! I've gone back and added a warning as you suggested.

Re: Sherlock/Molly, I'm hoping the humor helps it work for people who normally wouldn't like that pairing. It's not even really a pairing; it's Molly doing what she does and Sherlock reacting to it. I'm so glad you gave this a try, and stopped to share your thoughts. Cheers!

[mariole]

You know, I had that concern, but my beta said "It's mild so don't worry about it" so I didn't. Based on your comment, I've gone back and added a warning.

Thanks for the comment and thanks for reading!

[joyeuses]

Oh, Molly, quite clever! I love how she basically manages to out-logic Sherlock, at least on the topic of boyfriends and how they act.

(Though I would second/third the request for a dub-con warning.)

[mariole]

Done. Next time, I'll follow my instincts and err on the side of safety.

Yeah, I think Molly's got Sherlock's number on a variety of fronts; as long as she's the "expert", he's going to follow her lead. I like a woman who plans ahead.

Thanks for reading!