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How's My Driving/ConCrit and Plotting Post
This is a post for all concerns related to my portrayal of Allelujah Haptism.
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Am I getting something wrong? Something bothering you? Reoccuring mistakes? I love feedback and always look to improve.
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Did I do something to upset you- ICly or OOCly? Something ( Read more... ) -
[007] [Wish you were here]
...Zombie, I believe your dog has been over here all day. She was circling out front this afternoon, and I let her in for some food and water. She seemed a little worried ( Read more... ) -
[006] [There was a monster in my bed]
[A few pentaps.]
There appears to be a large octopus residing in my shower. I don't think it's dangerous, but I'm not entirely sure how or why it's there.
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[005] [I have no familiars]
[The writing is a little less precise than usual- mostly because he hasn't slept since last night.]
I'm not sure if I'm thankful or disturbed that others have been able to see this [pause. pentap.] odd creature showing up intermittently. I'm glad it's not a construct of my own mind, but I'd rather not be followed by some sort of singing gelatin. I ( Read more... ) -
[004] [Can't begin to say it]
I'm glad to see the ice subsiding. Hopefully things will pick back up now that there's no danger of tumbling from the branches or islands on the skates. At least now I'll have time to catch up on everything that was stagnated during the storm.
[Pentaps.]Has anyone seen Lithium about today? I wouldn't put it past him to have awoken early to get ( Read more... ) -
[003] [Thought we'd be the last to go]
With the talk of a storm, I can't help but wonder just how weather forms in such an environment-- or how the area itself works. I suppose the Tree is large enough to facilitate its ecosystem, but what does the tree live off of? Surely not the objects found in the Scavenger's yard. ...Though with things such as the islands and wilderness, I'm not ( Read more... ) -
[002] [Second Time Around]
Lithium- I've managed to secure employment, and will be looking for housing tomorrow. You would be welcome to accompany me should you wish to leave temporary housing. I believe the section I am considering has connected, but separate living spaces.
[Pause.]And while I appreciate the gifts of paints, I can't seem to get it off of my hands and ( Read more... ) -
[001] [Again again]
[The entry is written carefully in pen, and slowly, but with few full, lengthy pauses-- as though the writer had planned out what to say beforehand. The handwriting should be extraordinarily familiar to those who recognized Raise's- in fact, it's nearly identical.]I've seen several people introduce themselves here, so I suppose I should do the same ( Read more... )