just so you know, this feeling's taking control of me and i can't help it

May 03, 2011 01:34


robbery
yunho/jaejoong, pg, angst
1110 w.

yunho takes jaejoong's heart away.

i wrote this a long, long time ago and personally i don't think it's really good but i still hope you'll read it, like it and of course, leave a comment because i haven't written anything for such a long time :c thank you for all your support ♥

I wonder if he knows that this is what I need every morning. )

genre: angst, length: oneshot, genre: bittersweet, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, rating: pg

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hitomi2oo7 May 2 2011, 20:04:41 UTC
TT^TT This is unfair~!
But when life was fair? >.>

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:48:44 UTC
i know right ;;;; but they'll be together someday i'm sure :'> thank you for reading! ♥ c:

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yesalmen May 2 2011, 20:10:24 UTC
Really, what a beautiful fic but sad TTTT my poor Jae, if he stole your heart,you have to do the same with his^^
Thanks for the fic.

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:49:42 UTC
lkasjfd thank you ♥;; i'm sure yunho's heart got stolen by jaejoong too keke. i'm glad you liked it! :>

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bikkun May 2 2011, 20:15:41 UTC
I don't know what else to say but thankU for sharing! ^^ me likey~

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:43:28 UTC
thank you for reading and i'm glad you liked it! ♥ :)

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museelo May 2 2011, 20:22:09 UTC
spot!

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museelo May 2 2011, 20:44:49 UTC
i don't rmb the codes for big writing but i wanted to write ';; ♥' really big ;;
this is osm, i heart this really much you know. idky but it made me melt. angst is very welcomed and you made me all teared up. i srsly love your writing. it maye be 'simple' but idk you still manage to create sth in poeple's heart (at least in mine but i've reading others comments and i'm right)

though there's sth i'd like to know xD why alaways jj in this kind of situation? xD you and that green tea lover are the same! XDD poor jj boy :'3

thanks so much for this :'3 ♥
i wish i'd rmb the codes ;;'

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moonkissedx May 2 2011, 20:47:13 UTC
< font size="(number)">;; ♥< /font> without the spaces C:

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:53:58 UTC
keke now you know the codes. C: i'm really, really glad you like this bb ;;;; it seems like everyone likes angst keke. alskdj don't cry ;~~; /hands kleenex to you. i- thank you for liking my writing, i really appreciate all the praise and compliments you've given to me :'>

hurhur because it's jaejae! i don't know, it's just me to write him in this manner keke. as for that potato i really don't know why she's like this too cough.

thank you for reading and commenting bb ilu ♥ :)

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chunfacebiased May 2 2011, 21:44:10 UTC
.____." beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. bb this was great! ;~~~~; ♥ x10000

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:42:23 UTC
thank you so much bb lkasjf i'm so happy that you think this way ♥ forever ;;;;;;

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