just so you know, this feeling's taking control of me and i can't help it

May 03, 2011 01:34


robbery
yunho/jaejoong, pg, angst
1110 w.

yunho takes jaejoong's heart away.

i wrote this a long, long time ago and personally i don't think it's really good but i still hope you'll read it, like it and of course, leave a comment because i haven't written anything for such a long time :c thank you for all your support ♥

I wonder if he knows that this is what I need every morning. )

genre: angst, length: oneshot, genre: bittersweet, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, rating: pg

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byuldeureul May 2 2011, 23:15:52 UTC

SPOT SPOT SPOT SPOT OMG SPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT ;OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO;

Can you tell I'm excited? Kekekeke ♥ C:

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byuldeureul May 2 2011, 23:38:19 UTC

Oh. Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

--OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. ;_____________________;

M-Maybe I should have taken our earlier tweet convo from yesterday to be like a forewarning for me...I didn't realize this would be so sad ;;;;;;;;;;; /wails

I-I MEAN, maybe you didn't mean to make me this sad, but - oh, who am I kidding; I'm always left this way after your YunJae pieces ;~~~~~~~~~~; I'm stuck either way, it seems orzzzzzzzzz

Seriously, though - was this universe meant to leave me with the sense that Jaejoong will always be intent on this unrequited love story with Yunho? DDDDDDD: Because I got that sense especially by the tail end of it (the hints were all over the place from the start, with "We’re in a fairytale, though we’ll never get a happy ending." and "He still doesn’t know, he never does."), but the end still gets me because...well, foolishly, I had been hoping the entire time for Yunho to just REALIZE IT ALREADY because it's clear to me that he needs Jaejoong as much as Jaejoong needs him....... (sob and now I just thought of ( ... )

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 17:02:16 UTC
lkasjdf sweetie don't be so sad ;;;;; you make me sad when you're sad. i would think so :C i mean, he loves yunho so much but yunho doesn't seem to want to reciprocate his feelings so... i guess he's stuck here like this ;; hehe you caught my hints! it was meant to be a kind of warning, i would say? maybe just a foreshadowing of the ending. i wish i could have written that yunho would realise that he loves jaejoong and needs him but asldkfj never mind, i rarely do write sad endings anyway.

aigoo bbgirl, i didn't mean to lead you to think about their current situation! :ccccc

hehe do they? i hope you won't be upset over the story anymore ;~~~; thank you bb sobs and yes my heart aches for him too, poor baby. :(((( i want to thank you for always being so nice and sweet to me bbgirl ;;;; and i still think this piece is pretty amateur but if you like it then i will too ( ... )

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byuldeureul May 4 2011, 01:22:45 UTC

I-I'll try not to!! ;_______; I guess it's like that, huh......? Even though I shouldn't be surprised (since, like you even said, the hints were there), my heart went out to Jaejoong here, anyway /sobs

i could have written that yunho would realise that he loves jaejoong and needs him but asldkfj never mind, i rarely do write sad endings anyway.
I guess when you put it that way, though.......hmmmmmmmm that was daring of you, baby girl. AND admirable! I'm sure it must have been a hard ending to write, but I'm sort of glad you did, then~ :)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww it's not your fault, though, sweetie!! :CCCCCC I'm just...melancholy about their whole situation sighhhh it gets worse when I REALLY think about it, so - ! I just won't worry so much~ But you know it's my nature to worry, you know, so...I'll try! :((( I loved this story, okay - a lot a lot a loooooooooot ;O; Your work is NEVER amateur to me and this is no exception, so please have more faith in yourself? I have all the faith in the world in you, so ;;;;; Yahhhhh and it's no ( ... )

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yunho_ism May 3 2011, 00:15:50 UTC
aw~ so lovely. i adore your writing. ;________;
but i wonder if things truly were one-sided.

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:41:08 UTC
asdf;lk thank you ;;;; iwondertoo if you really want me to be honest about the fic i would say that i think yunho would have known about jaejoong's feelings since they are best friends in the fic after all. but he may not have said anything towards it? ;o; maybe i'll write a sequel to portray yunho's feelings towards jaejoong. thanks a lot for reading bb! ♥ :>

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:38:19 UTC
i would think that yunho knows jaejoong's feelings, it's just that maybe he didn't say anything? they know each other best after all. thank you for reading bb! ♥ c:

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qer_lee May 3 2011, 01:20:13 UTC
i dont know why..but im angry with Yuknow...!!!
u idiot ...!!! u didnt know that my JJ was so in lov with u for so long GRR...!!!
please tell me that there's gonna be a Yun's version XD
lov YunJae ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:36:44 UTC
it seems like everyone's angry with yunho keke oops. i don't know if there'll be a sequel to this because i planned for it to end like that, but maybe i will c: i love yunjae tons too! thank you for reading ♥ :>

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shinchul303 May 3 2011, 02:10:21 UTC
I LIKED it!

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:35:40 UTC
thank you for reading ♥ c:

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