just so you know, this feeling's taking control of me and i can't help it

May 03, 2011 01:34


robbery
yunho/jaejoong, pg, angst
1110 w.

yunho takes jaejoong's heart away.

i wrote this a long, long time ago and personally i don't think it's really good but i still hope you'll read it, like it and of course, leave a comment because i haven't written anything for such a long time :c thank you for all your support ♥

I wonder if he knows that this is what I need every morning. )

genre: angst, length: oneshot, genre: bittersweet, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, rating: pg

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Comments 78

dongwook May 3 2011, 03:11:20 UTC
Ah bb! I missed your work! <3

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:34:51 UTC
keke i missed you :c thanks for reading bb ♥ :>

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dracoslovebunny May 3 2011, 04:19:49 UTC
Onoes.... This has me all choked up, Yunho Y U steal hearts?? Oh, the angst! I really felt for JaeJoong in this one.

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:34:13 UTC
;;;;;;; don't cry! i feel for jaejoong too :c thank you for reading! ♥

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pikasu May 3 2011, 06:14:54 UTC
SUP
OMG I NEED A GANGSTA USERPIC

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pikasu May 3 2011, 06:19:08 UTC
wtf ihu wat do u mean u kenot write well harrrrrrr
you can write both english and chinese how on earth is that even remotely possible pls!!!!!! i am going to die for chinese tomorrow HAHAH i will just write feng he ri lis and kuang feng bao yus kkkk

also this fic. waylt ;______________________; and you say you can't write omg after that dreadful history and amath you break my heart even more!!!?!! D:

ok pls write more after our myes end kkk :DDDD
(and pft, you get a lot of comments too ok waylt)

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:32:54 UTC
WAT GANGSTA USERPIC LMAO YOU CRAZY AH.

wtf y u hate me! you love me lots lots pls. wat u mean wat i mean i kenot write well. i kenot write well means i kenot write well larh funny pertehto. lol pls my chinese writing is veh amateur. like my engrish. hurhurhurhur. pls ur chinese rly. when i see u i will give u intensive traininggggggg

wat wailt ;_________________; i didn't do anything! i can't write - you cannot understand english is it. /glares. hahaha pls i tried so hard to keep it bittersweet but i failed. lalala. your heart break become mashed potato. :D

yes yes yes you slavedriver i will write lots and lots until my arms break and your mind fails to comprehend whatever i'm writing kkkkk. what lah! i don't get a lot of comments pls i get quite few ok waylt (esp compared to you harrrrr potato) so i am a sad marshumello. hee. ilu you stupid potato rubbish bin woman ♥ c:

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heenoona May 3 2011, 06:30:48 UTC
REVENGE.... steal his heart back Joongie!!!

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:27:45 UTC
i'd like to think that jaejoong's got yunho's heart tied to his too! thank you for reading ♥ c:

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torakiss May 3 2011, 08:04:49 UTC
my heart hurts. TT_TT but this is really just beautiful. so beautiful. *grabs tissues*

I love angst.

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moonkissedx May 3 2011, 16:20:57 UTC
/hands you a band-aid with love hehe ♥ :> aslkfjd thank you bb ;;;; and i love angst too! even though it always makes me sad :c

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