Comments | moonstootired: H50 fic

moonstootired

H50 fic

Sep 29, 2011 00:55

fic, h50, steve is in over his head, au, steve/danno

Comments 21

zortified September 28 2011, 23:21:45 UTC

This is really awesome. I love how well you meld the episodes into the AU. I don't mind waiting for parts if they're as fun to read as this!

moonstootired September 29 2011, 10:17:20 UTC

Thank you. It's good to hear that.

ksl2025 September 29 2011, 01:15:38 UTC

Ohhhhh...I was so happy to see more of this AU. Positively delighted.

I love how you are working canon into the story. That's just awesome. Love the details about the cases. And steve meeting grace was just delightful.

I was hoping Steve might actually screw up his courage at the end. Sigh. Silly boy. But I'm guessing...hoping ...begging...that means there will be more of this to come. :-)

moonstootired September 29 2011, 10:19:55 UTC

Thank you. There's definitely more in store for these two. Might even pick up the pace in the next chapter. ;)

dante_s_hell September 29 2011, 01:19:29 UTC

I just love Psychic!Danny. You've captured their personalities so well. Great story!

moonstootired September 29 2011, 10:20:39 UTC

Thank you. :)

kitmerlot1213 September 29 2011, 01:46:37 UTC

I love getting Steve's perspective on his relationship with Danny, and now Steve got to meet Grace and of course he's completely charmed by her.

I love Chin's and Kono's playing matchmaker for our two favorite knuckleheads :)

And how much did I love Danny's just grabbing Steve and kissing him--YEAH!

Great work on this.

moonstootired September 29 2011, 10:21:39 UTC

Thank you so much. :)
Who wouldn't be charmed by Grace, right?

abbeyrd62561 September 29 2011, 06:11:47 UTC

I missed this story but understand RL and I'm glad you said you'd finish it. This is so good. I love how you've turned episodes around and added so much more to it. Danny with the ghosts and the auras. I also have a feeling that John McG is going to come back when Steve is with Danny. This is really good, love how they are feeling and working togethr. Can't wait for more and hope that if you can it will come just a little quicker. I also love the long chapters.

moonstootired September 29 2011, 10:27:10 UTC

Thank you. :)

Also, I hear ya. I hope I finish the next part quicker, but there is an 11-day-computer-free holiday coming up next week and the muses are always moody so we'll have to wait and see.

I am currently trying to erase the image of John McG's ghost popping up while the two are getting down and dirty from my mind. I need the giggle fits to stop. ;)