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Mar 29, 2007 01:26

tonight i snuck as many glances at steve's girlfriend as i could, looking for clues as to how someone could be so separate from their own body. her legs on display below her denim mini skirt were toned and strong, her face thin, but there was no denying that the bump beneath her blouse advertised new life. she was beautiful, she did glow and she ( Read more... )

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vomit_maggots March 29 2007, 12:51:06 UTC
LJ cut is your friend.

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msstink March 29 2007, 19:15:21 UTC
maybe yours.

i want people to see her.

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vomit_maggots March 29 2007, 19:33:07 UTC
I would prefer having a choice, personally.

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pre_show March 29 2007, 16:48:17 UTC
I know you are an artist, but do you write any fiction as well? Every time I read one of your entries I think, damn she can write. You have a unique way of describing the way you see things that touches a nerve with me.

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msstink March 29 2007, 19:17:25 UTC
the last time i actually tried to write fiction was in 11th grade and got a short story assignment. i will admit i had a blast with it. since then, with the exception of writing out a few dreams, i haven't written anything even remotely fictional. although i will also admit that the idea of it tuggs at me almost daily.

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_r_ March 30 2007, 03:16:01 UTC
it's as if she was dreaming and death came and took her and all she could say was "oh!" even though she was only mildly surprised.

thank you for sharing that.

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