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tammy715 April 13 2004, 13:44:42 UTC
Who is Bob ?

Oh my where do I start. Well I like Dan but not with Justin. Their so different in many ways. But alike too I guess. Something with Dan just doesn't jive with me. I don't know what and it may be nothing but still I have this feeling.

I am damn curious to what Brian whispered to Justin. I want my B/J lovin'.

But damn , I love to see a jealous Brian who has his work cut out for him. Yes indeed!

Make jealous!Brian work for Justin! Hee!

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myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 17:08:37 UTC
Who is Bob ?

Bob=Ted

Thanks much for the comments!

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reboot_wlm April 13 2004, 14:13:52 UTC
First of all, dispose of Dan. He's just too damn 'nice' to deal with. I get the feeling that Justin feels very safe with Dan, too safe maybe. Justin's settling down in his cozy nest and one day he's going to realize that he didn't achieve his dreams while he was hiding out.

Second, Brian. He needs to get over himself and get Sunshine back. We don't need to have any mushy declarations but we do need for them to be together. More Brian..More Brian...More Brian...

That is all. Continue please!

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myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 17:12:10 UTC
First of all, dispose of Dan.

LOL! You're right about Justin hiding. Justin has learned in the last six months to really fear the unexpected. I think he feels like everything unexpected that's happened to him has been tragic. Knowing exactly what's going to happen next is really comforting to him right now, but as he gets stronger and is able to put his mother's death into perspective cozy and safe won't be as much a priority as they are now.

More Brian..More Brian...More Brian...

As you can imagine, Brian has much to say about Dan and Justin and DanAndJustin!

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nono1 April 13 2004, 14:16:44 UTC
Thank you for another great chapter.

I feel so sorry for Dan, it's horrible! I want Brian and Justin together again, but what about the lovely Dan? Couldn't you just kill him off to make it easier on the poor guy? :D

I've friended you, if that's okay, as I really enjoy your fic and thoughts on qaf.

Thanks, Noelle.

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myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 17:20:19 UTC
Couldn't you just kill him off to make it easier on the poor guy? :D

Hee! "Poor" Dan has an awful lot of readers suggesting death as a way to humanely remove him from the equation!

But, like I said earlier, death is too quick and easy!

No problem with friending--glad you're enjoying the story!

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anonymous April 13 2004, 14:17:15 UTC
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

It's HERE. It's long. And it's everything Myrna-esque!!!

Knew it would fun fun fun for Dan to meet the gang. Knew he'll stand tall on his own--being the man he is. Love the spars bet him & Brian.

Still love Dan, though trouble is looming--finally ::rubbing hands together:: Love to see two alpha males dueling for Justin. Boy, the chemistry bet BJ is unmistaken but Dan can and will learn new tricks to keep his Sunshine.

I just love this series!!! Don't care who Justin ends up with--a true testament of your portrait of Dan--a simple name for a complex man. Okay done with the Dan lovefest. Back to our man Kinney, who has to work harder at it. So love his concern for Sunshine's other love--His Art.

Go back to re-read the crazed sex-fiend J. What a loaded chapter. Meeting all anticipation & expectation. Will raise bar for next one.

Jus great...great...great...until we read again.

Shirls

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myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 17:22:10 UTC
Still love Dan, though trouble is looming--finally

Yep! Pooooor Justin! It's never very smooth sailing for that boy!

Thanks so much for your kind comments! They're much appreciated!

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parallactic April 13 2004, 14:56:57 UTC
This chapter made me wish it was in Justin POV so I'd know what Deb and Brian said to him. Hopefully, he'll tell Dan about it later on.

"It is," Justin said. "I'm concentrating on graphic design. It's more of a business school approach."

Ooh, plot thickens. I think it's sensible of Justin to concentrate on graphic design, since it uses his artistic abilities and gives him a living wage. But I wonder why he didn't defend his decision when Brian blew up about it. Other people defended him instead. I wonder what Justin feels about the change in focus.

"Absolutely," Dan agreed. "I crack open people's chests and cradle their beating hearts in my hands, and you... sell them toilet bowl cleaner. It's almost exactly the same thing."

LOL. The parts where Dan talks about his job and defends Justin's decision remind me eerily of Brian. That same arrogance, the age difference, how they both support Justin's artistic endeavors, that put down. Methinks Justin has a type--arrogant older men. Also has a touch of daddy complex.

They had an ( ... )

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damec April 13 2004, 16:32:59 UTC
I think its more of a trophy wife complex, I mean look at his mom.

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parallactic April 13 2004, 20:45:18 UTC
Who's? Dan or Justin?

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myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 17:45:19 UTC
That same arrogance, the age difference, how they both support Justin's artistic endeavors, that put down. Methinks Justin has a type--arrogant older men. Also has a touch of daddy complex.

Hee! I love it! Ted says something very similar in the next part. Not even Brian can deny it!

Wonder if this is Dan's insecurities talking, or if Justin isn't getting his needs met.

Hmmm, perhaps it will become clearer in the next part (or two!)

Thanks for the comments! They're much appreciated!

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