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[inanutshell10]

PLAYER DETAILS
Name (or alias): Stephanie or Steph
LJ: inanutshell10
Email: queenohearts11@hotmail.com
AIM SN: optional beeskneesxx53

Comments

[np_dumbledore]

please fix the bad username tag :D

[inanutshell10]

*facepalm* Microsoft Word has issues but it's fixed :) And I completely forgot to briefly explain Penny and Dean at first but I added that in when I fixed the username tag. I hope that's okay?

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[np_dumbledore]

Several questions/clarifications:

Caps
First off, pureblood status, upper class, and ownership of a Nimbus are all capped. There's no leniency on these at this time. I do understand that you're moving this character from another comm, but to play here she'll have to be adapted to fit at NP. Additionally, past rosters for Quidditch have been filled at Keeper for Gryff from her fourth year on. While Penny might have made it on as a sub the last few years, she wouldn't have started. There may be room on the current roster for her to start but that will be up to the Quidditch mod to sort. There are no past Prefect rosters for her fifth year so Penny could have held that position then but last year's Gryff prefects are filled and this year only purebloods have been awarded badges.

PregnancyHer pregnancy is a serious issue and at this time, we're not going to approve that detail. We had two characters at the end of last term who graduated or didn't return because of pregnancies but we'd rather keep the issue out of school (neither

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[np_dumbledore]

Personality/History
Her weaknesses and strengths could use some more information. Most of her weaknesses are justified and turned around into strengths. She's irresponsible except. Her parents disagree with her but. Try not to turn them around so much. Not being good at games isn't really a weakness, nor is Quidditch really a magical strength (it is a magical sport but you could just as easily say she's athletic and expand on her being a physical person as opposed to this or that). Expand on it some more. Why is she good at certain courses? What do you mean by 'around the house magic'? Charms covers a lot of wizarding "essentials" and also plays fairly heavily into DADA, so if she's good at dueling, she should probably have some skill with wand work that probably applies to Charms as well

[np_dumbledore]

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DENIED

[np_dumbledore]

Due to inactivity/ lack of response on this application it has been denied.

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