two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, chapter 4

[of_hearts]

Glee. 3,508 words. I don't know how this ended up so long! I kinda had to sacrifice Puck's inner monologue-ish third person narrator for this chapter because I had too much Rachel stuff going on and dialogue and I'm bad at multi-tasking :( But have no fear, it should be swinging back around next chapter. Thanks so much for all your continued

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[takobob]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.
Can't wait for an update.
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[gentlelamb]

The tiny part of him that had yet to accept that he kinda maybe totally had a thing for this girl told him this was a really bad idea. Lucky for him, the fairly substantial part of him that lived below the waist was what made all his decisions.

Classic.

I've gorged on a LOT of P/R fanfic but your Puck character voice is the MOST spot on.

Love it.

[of_hearts]

Oh wow, that's such a huge complement, thank you so much. One of the most terrifying things as a writer is the fear of sounding completely out of character and out of touch. Sometimes it's hard to create that boundary between what you want a character to be and what they are, and you never really know if it works until the readers read. I'm so happy you've enjoyed it so far, and thanks so much for taking the time to share your thoughts!

[evie_oh]

I have the biggest silliest goofiest grin on my face from this fic...

“To someone like you, maybe, but to someone like me, it’s highly symbolic.” She took a deep breath and raised her chin. “It represents the high school struggle: love strangled by circumstance. The doomed fate of a future never to be; a future cut down brutally before it’s time.” She looked back at him, the sharp hint of diva in her voice, “I don’t expect you to understand how fitting celibacy is.”
I could so easily hear Rachel saying these lines. I love your grasp of the characters voices

That, and also because, though he didn’t quite know it yet, he was kinda maybe starting to think that he kinda maybe had feelings for Rachel.
I am so in love with this fic lol

[of_hearts]

I have the biggest, goofiest grin on my face just from writing it! They are seriously way too much (ridiculous) fun. I'm so happy you've enjoyed it so far-- we've still got quite a bit to go, so remember to check back for future updates! Thanks so much for taking the time to leave such a nice comment. Hope you had a great weekend!

[tellthestars]

so this was the first Glee fanfic I've EVER read, and now I'm obsessed.<3

[of_hearts]

Oh man, I can't believe I popped your Glee fic cherry! So glad you've been enjoying it so far! Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.

[of_hearts]

Thank you!