LJ Idol Week 5: "Building a Better Mousetrap"

[onda_bianca]

It was 2010 when I wore my heart on my sleeve and the man of my dreams blew his nose on it

Comments

[poppetawoppet]

I really love the poetic/song like feel to this

[onda_bianca]

Thank you:)

[bhyphen]

This is so good. I'm sorry us men can be such jack holes sometimes.

[onda_bianca]

Thanks. And everyone can be a jack hole sometimes.

[catwomon]

IF THIS IS NOT FICTION, SEEMS LIKE YOU MADE THE BEST CHOICE FOR YOURSELF. DOESN'T MATTER HOW LONG IT TAKES, SOMETIMES, IT JUST MATTERS THAT IT GETS DONE IN ITS CORRECT TIME! GO YOU!

[onda_bianca]

This is definitely not fiction but it surely was the best choice I've made. :)

[eternal_ot]

I liked the rhythm you built here...good riddance for the guy!

[onda_bianca]

Thanks and definitely! I'm in a much happier place. Even now he'll message me asking me to come back and telling me that he thinks of me, etc...and I just have no words for him.

[i_will_not_say]

I'm glad you were able to get away from the guy and make it stick. Good for you!

[onda_bianca]

Thanks!